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Regret
22 January, 2003
Author: KristyD.

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I'm sorry I couldn't say it,
how much I love you all.
I'm sorry I didn't try to,
though I knew I soon would fall.

I'm sorry if you miss me,
because I now am gone.
I'm sorry I couldn't keep trying,
and I'n sorry I couldn't hold on.

I want you to know that I love you,
no matter what may pass.
And if I am gone tomorrow,
that love will always last.

Shawn, you are like my brother,
you've always made me smile.
You've always kept one ear open,
although I'd talk awhile.

Sara, I know we both hurt,
and so words are hard to find.
But you still will be the best friend,
I ever in life could find.

Kevin, you've always been caring,
and always been there at my side.
Even when life had me scared,
and from you I would constantly hide.

Ashley, I hope that you see this,
although I'm losing faith.
Please come home to your family,
for family is of you what I think.

Rachel, you know that I love you,
and you know you and I are the same.
Don't think the world doesn't love you,
cause we always speak well of your name.

Jared, just know that I miss you,
more than has ever been said.
You're the first thing I think of each morning,
and the last when I go to bed.

All of you are my family,
the closest I've ever had.
And you're always the ones that I'll turn to,
even when times get bad.

I'm not sure where I'll go now,
or even if I'll survive.
But please don't remember me hurting,
but remember me still alive.

I'm sorry I can't speak anymore,
and that we can no longer be together.
But try to see it differently,
cause I know I will love you forever!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Awe (67.25.97.126) -- Thursday, January 23 2003, 10:33 am

Beautiful poem

I'm touched by your poem. Takes courage to express these deep feelings. Thanks so much Kristy.
Kristy (12.96.223.182) -- Thursday, January 23 2003, 03:39 pm

Thanx

I'm glad that you like it. Thanx for even reading it!
Confused (209.172.205.80) -- Wednesday, February 19 2003, 03:50 am

Amazing

iloved ur poem. it all seems to describe how i feel it was really touching. keep up the good work!! :O)
Mark Spencer (172.138.43.154) -- Wednesday, February 26 2003, 12:54 am

I know what you're talking about.

First let me say that I'm not pulling your chain when I praise you for your talent. I wish I had half your talent when I was sixteen. Perhaps then my suicide letters could have been as pretty as this. You are gifted with the ability to write. Gifted beyond your years. It wasn't until I realized my gifts that I actually wanted to wake up the next morning. You have so much opportunity for realizing your full potential, and your true purpose for being here. You are not so different from some of the greatest artistic talents in history. Van Gogh, Shakespeare, Poe, Mozart, just to name a few. Look at what they accomplished. How high you could climb, how far you could go, if you would only take up a cause. I believe in you Kristy, I truly do. You have no less a gift from God than the four I mentioned. You could shine just as bright as they. How much dimmer the world would be if you never gave yourself that chance. How many tears would then never fall, or smiles crease the faces of your readers? How many lives would never change, if you weren't here to inspire them? How many generations would feel the effects of that loss? You have the ability and the talent to effect that much of creation. God created our reality, like a carpenter creates a house. Your power is like that of the painter, who makes the house beautiful. Never forget that Kristy.

Mark
-tears- (24.154.158.138) -- Sunday, August 31 2003, 03:44 am

-touching-

-that is a beautiful poem and it touched me deeply, it takes a-lot of courage to express feelings that deep-
 
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