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Death Of Friends
20 January, 2003
Author: KristyD.

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My friends they hurt,
just as I do.
I can't help but wonder,
will we all be through?

And if we die,
who will go first?
What do we do,
when life's at it's worst?

I feel their pains,
just as though their my own.
But faster and faster,
I'm becoming alone.

They seem to die off,
one by one.
In this life again,
will we ever see the sun?

I miss those that I've lost,
but that won't be all.
Now I see, yes now I know,
soon each one of us will fall!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

heather (64.12.96.137) -- Sunday, August 3 2003, 05:53 am

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hi,
i just wanna say i really liked your poem, i can relate
Holly A. Badolato (12.34.167.95) -- Thursday, January 8 2004, 07:01 am

I feel your pain

Hey Kristy...Ive lost 14 friends in the last 3 years and its like i cant go a year without losing another one...i know what its like to lose a best friend a family member a boyfriend and just a friend...its tough and my friends help me get through it but its tough to let people get close to you when all you can think about is "who's Next?" But i always seem to get through it...keep up the good writing...you have talent...read mine and tell me if you like...PEACE!!!
KristyD. (12.176.64.48) -- Monday, February 23 2004, 11:07 pm

Holly....

I know what you mean about the "who's next" thing.... I can't bring myself to get close to anyone these days because it seems like eveytime I do they die.... I can't take that anymore so I decided to leave the last of my friends out of my life thinking maybe that way they'd be safe.... so far it's worked nothing has happened to them yet; however, I am starting to miss them, but in my head I figure if that's how to keep them safe then that's what I'll do.... thanks for readin and I'll be sure to read yours....
Holly A. Badolato (12.34.167.136) -- Tuesday, February 24 2004, 05:41 am

You got the wrong idea!!

See i tried doing what your doing and it doesnt work...things happen for a reason...i learned that...you cant just drop your friends because you dont want to hurt them...your not the one hurting them...i needed my friends and they were there for me through everything...you dont have to listen to my advice...im just a teenager...but im trying to help you before you make the same mistakes.
HOLLY A. BADOLATO
jessikah (67.2.59.244) -- Friday, February 27 2004, 03:30 am

i know how u feel

hey i know how u feel ive lost 4 friends since last novemer till now and i also lost my dad august15th 2003 its one of the hardest things to dill with going through life.everyone handles there greif diff, it hasnt even really hit me that i lost my dad i guess its cuz i wont let my self relize it and i block it out like it didnt really happen though i know it will catch up to me one day.
kristina (216.241.135.225) -- Sunday, April 4 2004, 02:56 pm

i know how u feal

that was good i have lost some good friends and family but like kristy said u have to keep ur head up and move on and jus think of the good times u had wid them.
amber (71.30.208.208) -- Tuesday, June 12 2007, 05:24 am

i know how you feel

i have lost one of my best friends on june 8, 2007 and i lost my dad when i was 1 so i know how you feel
kelsey (199.80.105.129) -- Thursday, November 1 2007, 09:44 pm

I feel what youre going through

i lost one of my friends she died in a very tragic accident. everyone at school misses her its so hard to say goodbye to someone you knew and one day you see them and then the next day their gone
 
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