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One Question I Can't Answer
11 February, 2004
Author: Leah06

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I hear your name and I look up
I see your smile and I melt
I listen to your voice and I get chills
I think of me with you
Anf I am lost in pleasant dreams
You mean so much to me
yet you do not know it
And I
am to scared to tell you.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Martin Vann (65.57.63.27) -- Thursday, February 19 2004, 11:22 pm

Leah06, sacrifice yourself, or, wait for love

So, you are to scared to tell this person, how you feel, this, I understand, and share these thoughts with you. Scared/fear, these two feelings, belong to all of us, who breath life in, yet we want more than to breath, we, you and I, want the thrill of life. We have, each of us, a safe guard, built within, some call it fear, others, recognize this feeling as a word, Caution.

You need to decide, away from your emotions, what you feel you want to say and do, emotions, will lead you astray and present yourself as the youngest lamb, prepared for the prey.

Decide, within in yourself, for wisdom is roaming here, or you can go with emotion, and become the prey's delight.

Words of quality and reality, you did very well!

UM
Leah06 (206.110.20.2) -- Saturday, March 6 2004, 12:25 am

UM...

I always love reading your comments, they are oh so wonderful, no matter what the intent. Thanks for taking the time to read my poems, it means alot to me even more when you respond to them.


Leah Kendall
 
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