Replay by Leah06

Right now it's snowing
It is a bit cold
But it is all worth it.
I miss civilization
Yet I am happy to be away.
Here time passes by without notice
It's like no one cares
And everyone is happy and free.
It's like a single moment
That you want to keep
And remember forever
While you hit the replay button
Over and over
In fear of loosing sight
Of what really matters.
In fear of loosing
Who you really love.
Everyone had experienced that moment
It could be anything
It may not even be easy to realize
But when you find it
Everything seems to make sense
And everything around you seems to fit.
You are no longer confused
Things all of a sudden seem clear
And you dont ever want to let go.
Your replay button is your heart
That moment will become so dear to you
And as long as the heart continues to beat
The momory of that moment
Will replay in your mind and soul forever.
I found mine
Now whats yours?

Terrie* (65.148.230.49) -- Wednesday, January 7 2004, 04:49 pm

Leah06..
totally unique... absolutely classy....ohhhh yeah....i've definently placed my heart in that mode pressing replay/pause many, many times hoping to escape the reality of the current situation...bringing back old poems back to life as i sort thru old memories ,is one...oh i remember..they're not sad poems to me any more just refreshing..and a reminder that someone special existed in my life and we both took the time to enjoy life to it's fullest..oh yea! this is definently excellent writing! keep sharing i always look forward to reading your new work. HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! Terrie*

Sarah A (82.35.78.29) -- Wednesday, January 7 2004, 05:53 pm

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great poem. i can relate to that feeling too. keep it up!

Leah06 (206.110.20.2) -- Wednesday, January 14 2004, 09:23 pm

terrie and sarah...
thanks both of you for the comments, this one i wrote over christmas brake in wisconsin. i will try to keep upthe writing but latley i havent had much free time so i find myself writing in my classes and then when the period is over, i notice i have no idea whats going on in the class. thanks again, and i will continue to write when i can.

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