Just One Question
11 November, 2003
Author: Leah06
I know we are just friends
But I'm feeling something more
I've been wanting to share my heart with you
SO what am I waiting for.
You are all I think about
You're in the air I breathe
I think we should be together
Because I know you wont deceive.
I have known you for awhile
And the more I know
The more I find to like
Its time to let my feelings show.
I may not stand a chance
You are an amazing find
I've never met someone like you
So perfect and so kind.
I have to tell you how I feel
Just so you will know
I have a lot to give
Just give me the chance to show.
I wish to be with you
I wish to hold your hand
I wish to give you hugs
Walk with you across the sand.
I want us to be together
I wish not to be lonely
So I have one question
Will you be my one and only?
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Stacey (68.82.126.206) -- Wednesday, November 12 2003, 06:28 pm Just wanted to let you know, i thought this poem was adorable. Wishing you good luck. |
| shari (208.132.18.179) -- Wednesday, November 12 2003, 08:59 pm Excellent work. How can he refuse words like this? BEST WISHES SHARI |
| Martin Vann (67.75.182.211) -- Wednesday, November 12 2003, 11:30 pm Leah06, I can not think of a place here, on earth that is, where two in love can walk, where there will not be some sand. I think, perhaps, it is the sand, that we walk upon together, that tells/leads our hearts, to what will be. Leah06, your recent work is so, very advanced in thought, feeling, and saturated with love's touch. Its, like you have reached a point, where you visualize with your heart's words, the price of love. My, how you have grown, these words, come from a woman. "The girl, dissapears from my eye and returns as a Princess who is learning, the ways of the heart." Excellent Work! UM |
| Silkened Moon (206.216.224.33) -- Thursday, November 13 2003, 01:12 am I looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooved this poem Leah. It was so true, many of us have this very issue about our best friends of the opposite sex. Sometimes you just feel it in your veins that they could be the one. I've been there, and this poem explains and lays it out perfectly. How were you able to come up with such a inspirational Poem? Yes, I said INSPIRATIONAL! Were you able to write this poem because this poem is true about yourself? If so, your emotion comes out so clear and beautiful. I want to thank you Leah, this poem rocked!!! I loved it so much. So many of us go through that stage, and you were able to make the focus more clear. Nice poem Leah, you truly are an inspiration, and of course, a very talented poet. |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, November 13 2003, 03:05 am Thank you all so much. yes i wrote this as the truth. I have a great friend who means alot to me, maby to much for my own good. This was for him. I hope ill have the courage to give it to him someday. Thanks for the comments they are all so sweet. I love you all! Leah Kendall |
| Terrie* (65.136.6.194) -- Thursday, November 13 2003, 03:16 am ohhhhhh....this is absolutely Beautiful ...it takes me back to the very first poem i wrote to "my one and only"...Leah i wish you many blessings w/this poem as you share it w/that special person...from all of your writings your a darn pretty special somebody too...keep sharing the happiness that your heart is nourished on.... |
| Moonlight (cody) (67.26.97.132) -- Thursday, November 13 2003, 06:10 am Leah.... I love this poem so much and i know that this boy will want you, he would have to be crazy not too. You love him so much yet you only know his words, u have not yet seen the dark side of the moon, only when u see the darkness can u truly see the light, it is always darkest just before dawn. You are a shining star. Your light burns brighter than the rest. Never has there been or ever will another like you. So... yes i will take you. |
| Friend Of Leah (206.110.20.2) -- Thursday, November 13 2003, 09:24 pm ok first, this wasent for you, its for this guy leah likes at school. i dont mean to be mean but its true. His name is... well i wont say it because not everyone needs to know. and the end of your comment sounds like you want to seduce her or something. and thats a big NO! anyways, leah great poem and i hope he sees this and gives you a good response, i think you two are ment for eachother, although he might not see it quite yet. and if you are the guy and is reading this, you need to open your eyes, leah is an amazing person if you get to know her. GIVE HER A CHANCE! |
| Megan (152.163.252.165) -- Friday, November 14 2003, 03:11 am Wonderful job in expressing your inner self. XoX -Megan- |
| Leah06 (206.110.20.2) -- Friday, November 21 2003, 09:34 pm thanks for reading my poetry, and thanks for the comments. they mean a lot to me. Leah |
| Holly A. Badolato (12.34.167.42) -- Saturday, January 24 2004, 03:41 am This poem is great Leah...im glad you wrote it on the truth because it shows more feeling...well its a great poem...i hope to read more by you...dont stop writing..your really talented... |
| Leah06 (24.5.241.141) -- Saturday, January 24 2004, 11:17 pm thank you for reading my poems holly, and im glad you think i am talented. I will get back to writing soon, hopefully. Thanks again. Leah Kendall |
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