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Identity
2 November, 2003
Author: Leah06

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I am the poet
The one who speaks her mind
The one hidden behind books
Looking for that find.
I am the girl
Who never got a chance
The one who never experienced her first kiss
Or asked to the dance.
I am the student
Who strives for an honor roll GPA
While dedicated to marching band
Trying to pass each day.
I am the blonde
Who stands up for her rights
Believes in the “out casts”
Picks her fights.
I am the friend
Who is always the sturdy shoulder
The one who never walks away
The one true treasure holder.
I am the heart
With all of the bruises
The one full of love
For whomever she chooses.
Who are you?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

KitKatrina (68.113.60.103) -- Monday, November 3 2003, 08:58 am

wow

I really liked this poem. When I got to the last line it really made me think. I should probably write a poem too and see who I am..Great job here Leah...Enjoyed it very much..
Terrie* (65.148.208.167) -- Tuesday, November 4 2003, 01:12 am

you are a very devoted friend to many.....

sweetie,your poetry speaks in high volumne. i just love and admire the straightforwardness style in your poetry...your friends are a lucky group to have you among their circle...we could all use a friend like you....Hmmmm....who am i?...well lets see....i once loved ...you can say, i am yesterdays dream rescueing todays heart..therefore i can and am able to love again with ...... great intensity......keep posting ....
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, November 4 2003, 02:37 am

KitKatrina and Terrie*

I am happy you both like my poetry. And im even happier that you take the time to comment. it means alot to me. and thanks so much for everything!

Leah Kendall
Megan (205.188.208.137) -- Tuesday, November 4 2003, 02:47 am

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This poem was wonderful. You sound like a great person. More people should be like you heh and I wish I could be more like you.
Leah06 (206.110.20.2) -- Tuesday, November 4 2003, 09:13 pm

Megan...

Wow, that is probly one of the sweetest things anyone has ever said to me. Thanks for reading this and thanks for making me smile.

Leah Kendall
Pamela (66.38.146.7) -- Wednesday, November 5 2003, 04:36 am

Um

Pardon my french, but that poem kicked A*@!
Such a tribute, and such an amzing picture painted of yourself as this shy, still developing (spiritually) human being, but who is confident in ways and chooses her own path.
Beautiful.
Loved it.
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, November 6 2003, 12:57 am

Pamela..

Thanks, i aprriciate the comments, and im glad people can see who i really am through this poem. Thanks again for your comments.
Fred (66.219.164.43) -- Sunday, November 28 2004, 07:39 pm

IDK

WOW it was ok but ask me it was ok
Leah06 (67.169.135.192) -- Tuesday, January 4 2005, 01:37 am

Fred

well thanks for thinking "its ok".
 
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