Lost Soul
5 October, 2003
Author: Leah06
It's like I'm slows being excluded
As if I don't fit in anymore.
The road seems endless
And all I see are people too thick to notice me.
Like I don't exist
Or I just don't matter anymore.
It hurts to think about what I was
And compare it to what I am now.
It's as if I'm slowly fading
Out of memories and now lives.
Now, it's hard to find that place
Where I once fit in.
Where it didn't matter
And I was comfortable with my surroundings.
I have lost my soul
For a brief second, I find it through poetry.
I guess this is my cry for help.
But since I no longer exist
I don't have a voice
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| poop (12.232.12.22) -- Friday, October 17 2003, 02:57 am really good...use more vocab :o) |
| Pamela (66.38.146.7) -- Friday, October 17 2003, 03:45 am That ending was a big BANG! Wow! I love those last three lines! Can you tell I'm excited by the exclamation marks! I really love this poem! Great job! |
| Terrie* (65.150.167.108) -- Friday, October 17 2003, 05:27 am gotta agree w/Pam....can't top that...your poetry is very moving..great poem i loved it too!!!! |
| Leah06 (206.110.20.2) -- Thursday, October 23 2003, 08:32 pm Thank you everyone, im glad you all liked it. And thanks for taking the time to let me know! Leah Kendall |
| Ashley R (66.52.72.184) -- Wednesday, October 29 2003, 02:28 am Whoa. Like that poem kind of relates to me a little bit. Cuz, like i was popular last year. But now i'm not. And sumtimes i miss the poplarity. But i'm just happy with the few friends that i have. I mean I was popular and had like 50 friends, and yet i still felt emptyness. But now that i'm not popular, and have only 4 friends (i know that might be a bit pathetic, but still)i dont feel emptyness. If anything, i feel more ful-filled than ever. Thanx Rachel, Chelsea, Rebecca nad Jessika |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, November 4 2003, 02:33 am Umm, thanks for reading it, i hope you liked it and it helped you in some way. and its not the number of friends, its the relationship you have with them that matters. Leah Kendall |
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