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These Chains
15 July, 2003
Author: Leah06

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Walking through medows
Of flowers so sweet
As far as I can see
Flowers a sheet.
Turning around
You standing there
The sun on your face
The wind in your hair.
Our eyes join together
Love, passion, and bliss
Leaning even closer
For love's true kiss.
Reaching for eachother
To my surprise
My hands are held together
I open my eyes.
Thease things around my wrists
Are locking me up inside
No where to run
No where to hide.
No where to go
No where to be
All alone
Your face I want to see.
Not missed
Not wanted
Not needed
Just haunted.
It was just a dream
Hear my plee
Out of everything else in the world
I want to be free.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ben (67.123.244.245) -- Friday, July 18 2003, 10:56 am

From start to.....

I liked this from start to finish. The turn it took and the tension and drama. Good work, Leah06!
rubydragon (213.249.157.106) -- Friday, July 18 2003, 12:47 pm

nice

I like it, well worded, you manage take me away to a land of dreams.
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, July 24 2003, 07:14 pm

ben and ruby...

Im glad you like it. I really write this one for the forum but yea.... Thanks again
 
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