Forever Broken
1 June, 2003
Author: Leah06
I guess my heart is gullible
All of this has happened before
You play your every move
And then shove me to the floor.
You treat me like i am special
Nothing lower than a queen
Then drop me like its nothing
Just like every other teen.
You get me to belive i love you
That you love me too
Then cheat and lie to me
And now i need the glue.
I end broken up in pieces
As you walk out the door
While i try to glue my heart
To be as good as before.
Im not that good at puzzles
I need a stronger glue
It keeps falling apart
And there is nothing i can do.
After every time
They take a pice for token
My heart is missing pieces
I am forever broken.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| ZoOMBIE197666 (216.39.194.15) -- Monday, June 23 2003, 02:43 am hey i really love ur poem and i can totaly relate 210% and i was wondering if i could copy your poem and print it out so i could tape it to the wall in my room. i know it sounds weird but i write alot of poems and so do my friends and all the good ones i like to keep and put on my wall. so if its ok with you.. can i use ur poem? |
| ryan (24.153.177.14) -- Monday, June 23 2003, 04:32 am is this about scott? or about me? i like it alot it has alot of beat to it. i think me and courtney gunna break up though im me |
| Brenda Michelle (152.163.252.38) -- Thursday, June 26 2003, 03:16 am wow this is a great work of art! it speeks for its self. great job leah! |
| Ash (65.73.59.236) -- Monday, June 30 2003, 11:52 pm This poem rocks it reminds of that Ashanti song, Foolish! |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Wednesday, July 16 2003, 02:54 am I didnt know people would like it this much. ZoOMBIE ok, go ahead. Im glad you all liked it. Its very personal to me and it is actually about a few young men who have really touched my heart. Thease people are really special to me. And im glad this poem came out the way it did!Thanks again! |
| Aj (66.120.161.101) -- Wednesday, July 16 2003, 03:15 pm That was great! I love poems which flow from experiance, keep it up ^^ -AJ. |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Wednesday, July 16 2003, 05:22 pm I didnt expect this many people to respond. Im glad you all liked it. Yes you can put it on your wall. Its about a few wonderful young men who have touched my heart in many ways. So yea. Thanks for the comments! |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, July 17 2003, 09:38 pm Yeah go ahead and put my poem on your wall. Thanks for all the comments. And ryan ill tell you later. Thanks again everyone! |
| LinzAy (152.163.252.38) -- Thursday, July 24 2003, 08:08 am Hey girl!! great one! |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, July 24 2003, 07:16 pm yea you can use my poem. I hope you will continue to read them. Its fun writing them. Thanks again for the comments! |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, July 24 2003, 07:16 pm yea you can use my poem. I hope you will continue to read them. Its fun writing them. Thanks again for the comments! |
| Ben (67.123.245.148) -- Saturday, September 13 2003, 07:07 pm When a heart gets broken, it does seem like forever the pain is going on. I like the way you expressed it here in this poem, Leah06! You are a writer! Keep up the good work! Thanks! |
| Martin Vann (63.208.60.160) -- Saturday, September 13 2003, 08:12 pm Leah06 You write with the experience of an adult, then again, you sound like, even with the experience expressed in this poem, you sound, like an easy touch? A few sweet words, a warm embrace, then, its flesh to flesh. Love is not a test of how much pain a heart can take, it is a test of when to use restraint. You have the experience, as expressed in your poem, now the hard part, answer this, from where, comes wisdom? Hope you don't feel a harshness in my reply, for its obvious, you have much to offer, yet, it sounds as if it can be obtained, with words you want to hear and a warm embrace. Leah06, you know me well enough to realize, I'm am replying to your poem, not you as a person, sometimes, the expression is not the person, but, the creative action of the poet's pen, which you are working, very well. Impressive work. UM |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, September 18 2003, 12:58 am im glad you liked it ben and thanlks for the comments. UM im not so shure i quite understand the flesh to flesh part. But im glad you took the time to write such long comments. They mean alot to me. Thanks again. |
| Pamela (66.38.146.116) -- Thursday, September 18 2003, 05:22 am Wow. What a paralyzing poem. I don't think I could've resisted the temptation to stop and think about what you just wrote. I would love to give you some amazing compliment right now but the fact is, you have left me stunned and unable to really comprehend words. F*@#en beautiful! Pardon my french...... |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 01:53 am i am gald you liked this one. What nice comments. Thanks so much! |
| joyce ivy (68.19.190.237) -- Tuesday, October 26 2004, 01:53 pm this was great leah..the teen years..believe you got them down...great poem |
| Leah06 (24.7.31.81) -- Monday, November 22 2004, 09:11 am Thanks! |
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