Forever Gone
29 April, 2003
Author: Leah06
I walked away
Locked you out
You can't come in
With scream nor shout.
It is your fault
You did not care
My tears you caused
Mine heart you tear.
I thought you were wrong
But now know right
All those harmful words
You said to me that night.
I used to love you
But now no way
You try to return
But please go away.
You also loved me
That I knew
When I locked you out
You cried too.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| CrYsTaL (206.216.224.92) -- Friday, May 2 2003, 12:29 am Great poem, Really expressive! Like the tone and emotions of it. |
| luc (68.74.156.12) -- Friday, May 2 2003, 02:33 am yeah same here |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Friday, May 2 2003, 03:39 am im glad you 2 liked it. Thanks for taking the time to coment! |
| RubyDragon (213.249.157.106) -- Friday, May 2 2003, 10:39 am Nice writing, you have brought a tear to me |
| Seizure (216.47.215.144) -- Saturday, May 3 2003, 09:00 am expressed well. |
| Brenda Michelle (209.178.147.218) -- Monday, May 5 2003, 06:41 am i really like this one, your expression are very strong! keep writting! |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, May 8 2003, 12:38 am I really appritiate the coments. I am so glad you gyes like it. I will keep writing if people keep responding and comenting on my poems everyone! |
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