Zach
8 April, 2003
Author: Leah06
I know you don't like poetry
But I still wrote this for you
I hope you take the time to read this
And maby like it too.
I know I really like you
Why.....I can't say
I can't help it
It just ended up this way
I think you like me too
But that is not yet a fact
We have close to nothing in common
But opposites attract.
We have just one problem
Your best friend likes me too
We have been together for a few weeks now
I coulden't tell you.
I'm telling you this now
Because I love you too
I am sorry all of this happened
I hate that I hurt you.
This is why you woulden't let me
Know whats in your heart
Because you knew i'd hurt you
When i just wanted to be a part.
Now you probly hate me
I don't blame you
It is all my fault
I hate me too
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| ryan (24.153.177.14) -- Wednesday, April 16 2003, 01:28 am i like it one of ur better ones but i dont get why u hate yourself(feel me in) |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Wednesday, April 16 2003, 03:55 am see i like him a lot (or did) and i was going out with his bestfriend and he didnt know he still likes me but i just feel so bad that i cant even face him or talk to him. Verry bad! |
| rubydragon (213.249.157.106) -- Wednesday, April 16 2003, 01:46 pm opposites attract, is only good for a while because its different and unusual, but eventually find things out about each other that gets in the way, then everything goes bad really bad. its happened to me too many times, and there is not even glint of friendship with any of them. It's a big risk to take, and have to prepared for the hurt. absolutely excellent poem!! |
| Mariooooooooooooooooooo (again) (66.81.78.76) -- Friday, April 18 2003, 07:23 pm sniff sniff i touched my heart (?) Anyways, if he doesn't understand the poem, then he's very pathetic, isn't he? anyways, if he doesn't understand it, you should explain... good luck |
| Brenda Michelle (209.178.146.190) -- Monday, April 21 2003, 03:54 am i really like this one. like marioooooooooooooooooo (don't know how many "o's" to put) if he dosn't understand it he has to get his prioritys strait! and you shouldn't hate yourself no matter what happens. and not to be mean or rude or anything if your not sure he likes you, it dosn't matter who you go out with. but if you have your eyes set on this guy do the best you can to get him. but if all else fails just forget him. because there was a shooting in a mall near where i live about 2 days ago, and he killed his girlfriend and her new boyfriend because she left him and then a day later he klled himself in the mall. that is really sad. and i don't want you to end up like that!(not saying you would or anything) jus to be on the safe side!!! by the way this is another great poem it deserves a rose! @-,-------- |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Monday, April 21 2003, 04:55 am Im glad all of you gyes liked this one. He dosen't like poetry at all and when i sent this to him he didnt get it. So ill specify next time he talks to me. Thanks for the rose brenda. |
| friend (205.188.208.102) -- Saturday, September 6 2003, 09:03 pm who is this about? i don't recall a zach in out group, and i thought you only had one boyfriend. no offense, but since i'm one of your close friends, i think you would have told me if someone else liked you too. I feel forlorn... |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, September 9 2003, 11:43 pm yes, you may be but i dont tell manythings in my life. I keep them tomyself. He was after erich and didnt go to our school. I didnt tell anyone because of what happened between me and erich. |
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