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For You
8 April, 2003
Author: Leah06

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I say that I love you
But you don't think it's true
Every time you say it
I don't belive you.
I want you to know
Just how I really feel
I want you to know
That I am for real.
Look into my soul
Be my first kiss
Not one day has passes
That you face i don't miss.
Occupy my thoughts
Warm me with hugs
Tell me your problems
Instead of giving me shrugs.
You compleate my heart
Empty my head
Not once have you caused
One tear shed.
Liked you then
Like you still
Always have
Always will.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

martin Vann (67.75.182.198) -- Thursday, April 10 2003, 02:16 pm

Lot of dedication here.

Leah06;

There is so much dedication here, its difficult to think, he will not come around. Guys can where their heads like hard hats, sooner or later we start using our heads instead of just wareing them.

Very sweet poem.

MartinV
Red Dragon (210.14.4.51) -- Thursday, April 10 2003, 02:51 pm

~..~

you have written the words yet its all in your heart and you have never let them out. somehow the long longing is there i know.but when will you decide to take the courage to let him know?
weirdo (12.219.218.63) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 04:12 am

koo

MONEY!!!!
LinzAy (205.188.208.72) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 10:50 pm

''''''

ooo...good writing 06!
luc (68.74.121.133) -- Saturday, April 12 2003, 02:32 am

no title

lovely... no other word for it.. well um.. yeah not at the moment anyways.. :P
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Sunday, April 13 2003, 04:42 am

Thanks everyone!

Im not shure what you mean RD ut please tell me i would love for you gyes to correct me and tell me how to make my poems better. Thanks for the comments!
Brenda Michelle (216.244.6.92) -- Sunday, April 13 2003, 04:48 am

WOWZERS

once again you have out done yourself. this is a wonderful poem. there are so many ppl in this world that can relate to it. keep up the great work!!!

p.s i have given you many "WOWZERS" but this is a TRIPLE WOWZER. you desirve another rose. @-,------ hope you enjoy!!!
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 01:27 am

Thank you!

Thanks brenda. I like flowers. lol
Stacey (68.82.126.206) -- Friday, May 9 2003, 08:55 pm

To Leah06

I love this poem. Great job !!

~ Stacey
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Saturday, May 10 2003, 12:40 am

Stacy

Thanks, i am glad you liked it.
friend (205.188.208.166) -- Saturday, September 6 2003, 08:50 pm

no title

is this about erich?
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, September 9 2003, 11:41 pm

"friend"

No, this isnt about erich, this was after him.
 
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