One Dream
2 April, 2003
Author: Leah06
I tingle, I flutter
My stomach turns to nots
I smile, I grin
My heart pounds
I race, I tense
My breaths shorten
I'm happy, I'm free
You the key to my heart
I forget, I loose
Time races by
I wait, I watch
You finally show
I speak, I listen
We talk for hours on end
I mature, I grow
We do this together
I fall, head over heels for you
I wake, I blink
It is amazing what happens
In one short dream.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| luc (68.74.122.199) -- Monday, April 7 2003, 04:40 am i really liked the part where it says " i this i that" and so forth.. right before the next two or three lines.. nice one work... |
| LinzAy (205.188.208.138) -- Monday, April 7 2003, 09:49 am Ah! good writing! |
| Brenda Michelle (216.244.30.215) -- Monday, April 7 2003, 06:06 pm this is another great piece of art. i felt like i was really in that dream. i hope i have that kind of dream one day!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Martin Vann (67.75.176.42) -- Monday, April 7 2003, 10:03 pm Leah06, You do not know of what you write, or perhaps, you truly do. You are the mirror of what so many hearts feel and at your years, it amazes me, that you can write this way. I know someday, you will be free, and all the love you ever dreamed will belong to you. You are the spec of sand, that becomes a pearl, others will read your words, long after we are gone, because your heart has eyes, and we love what it sees! Be the vision that you See, Leah06, it will come true, don't believe in me, believe in YOU! As we do. MartinV |
| barb (206.191.91.76) -- Monday, April 7 2003, 11:18 pm good description of things liked it |
| RinRin (24.25.55.231) -- Tuesday, April 8 2003, 09:25 pm i really enjoyed this one! dreams like this deserve to be written down, as i'm sure many have had dreams like it, only wishing that they would come true...i know i have! excellent job! |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Wednesday, April 9 2003, 01:45 am Im glad all of you like my poem. I guess i will keep submitting my poems then! |
| ERINBrenna (24.175.194.221) -- Thursday, April 10 2003, 04:52 am I love it, it's very inense in someways just like a drema. It's fast and then slow. Good variation. |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 01:33 am Thanks. I appritiate the comment |
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