With You by Leah06

When I am with you.
.. Every breath
A sunset in heavan
Every tear
A crystal
Every heart beat
A dream
You bring me passion
Your smile changes the moment
Your face
An angel's kiss
Your touch
The wisp of a dove's wings
When I see you my heart skips
Like a ripple a cross a silent pond
With out you
My like woulden't be the same
I dream or your
Next word
Next touch
Next glance
The next chance I have to be strong

Martin Vann (65.57.62.203) -- Wednesday, April 2 2003, 10:35 pm

Geeeeezzzzzzzzzze.
Leah06;

You have a heart full of words, turned to verse, coming out faster than a dam that has burst. I not only feel this rush, this burst of freedom from which your heart cries out. I see it in your words, go back and read it, you write so, fast! Like you can't get the feelings out fast enough. Dove's wings, ripples on a quite pond, its all there, Leah06, slow down, let your heart catch its breath and give control, back to you. We are not going anywhere. Its so wonderful that your heart is so hungry to be heard, we will listen, just slow down, your going to give me a heart attack. Yes, this is beautiful, but your heart beats too fast, I think, so, slow down, else, you drain your heart of its precious, thoughts and give me a heart attack.

MartinV

Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, April 3 2003, 03:04 am

Well...
You always make me blush martin!This one is from awhile ago. I just never ahve the time to subbmit all of them. Sorry about the spelling problems im not that good with spelling. I can't belive people ven like my writing. All my friends think im weird. This gye has been in my life for 3 years, i have liked him off and on throught those years. I like him right now, but he dosent know and im too scared to tell him. I want to show him my poetry soooooooo much but im scared. Thanks for the wonderful comments Martin. I think you my #1 fan!

RinRin (24.25.55.231) -- Tuesday, April 8 2003, 09:43 pm

beautiful!
this poem expresses so much passion! you certainly have a way with words...you're able to string together a sentence full of the most beautiful words that fit the subject entirely too well! i bow down to thee!!

Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Wednesday, April 9 2003, 01:54 am

Thanks for the bow
I have fans. YAY! I bow down to all of you because you make me a better poet. Thanks for you help. And thanks for the comments.

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