Wanting You
24 February, 2003
Author: Leah06
I want to see you
Look deep into your eyes
Hold your hand
As our sprits soar across the skys.
The times I have said I love you
It came right from my heart
When I reach for your comfort
I forget we are so far apart.
You make my heart skip
My sprit soar
My smile so big
My mouth becomes soar.
I can picture you
In my head
I dream of us
When I slumber off to bed.
I hope someday I will find you
And you will find me too
So I can say in person
I love you.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| sasha (64.12.96.106) -- Friday, March 28 2003, 01:20 am ITS A CUTE POEM...I LOVE IT.YOU ARE ONE OF THE BEST WRITERS I SEE SO FAR...KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! |
| texas (24.153.177.14) -- Monday, March 31 2003, 06:39 am this is a great poem. makes me think of the girl i used to love was all the same thoughts i used to have. but i like this one a lot |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 04:18 am I didnt think anyone would respond to this one. Thanks sasha i hope you continue to think of me like that. Texas, I am glad this poem could relate to you. The only problem is.......... no one has ever loved me.Keep the comments coming! |
| anonymous (208.254.109.22) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 08:45 pm great poem. i can relate to this poem too. youre a great writer. maybe someday someone will love you! |
| MetaFlare777 (4.61.195.232, 1) -- Wednesday, April 2 2003, 08:45 am Hm......good poem. However, I have to comment on one of your replies of never being loved. I'm not sure if you're a Christian or not, but if you are, then you should know that God loves everyone. If you're not a Christian, then you should still know that God loves you, nobody what you go through. |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, April 3 2003, 04:16 am I know god loves me as well as my friends and family, but no one else. Im shure somone knows what i mean. |
| Brenda Michelle (216.244.32.126) -- Tuesday, April 8 2003, 05:47 am i love this poem, and it doent matter if any one has ever loved you. trust me i know, as long as you have your family and your caring friends that is all you really need to be happy, and i know fate will lead the way to your true love.. i have been throgh a lot more in 2 yrs. then most people have in a life time. just rememeber everyone one here loves you and is here for you, especially me, i cant mend your wounds but i can help you thrugh your pain. |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Wednesday, April 9 2003, 02:01 am Thanks Brenda, that really means a lot to me! |
| RubyDragon (213.249.157.106) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 03:27 pm I know what you mean, sometimes I feel the same, especially right after my heart is broken, but then I realised that there is someone out there who loves me, they just dont know it yet. They will appear one day when you least expect it!! |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Wednesday, April 16 2003, 04:27 am I can't wait untill he showes up. Im not shure if i can take another heart break. |
| rubydragon (213.249.157.106) -- Wednesday, April 16 2003, 01:40 pm The best part about a heartbreak is you know in time you will be okay and a lot stronger and wiser than before!! I would rather go without one though!! |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Monday, April 21 2003, 05:07 am Yea me too ruby! |
| qtkisses96 (24.224.0.60) -- Monday, April 21 2003, 08:06 pm Leah~ i am so sorry about things that have been goin on in ur life! there is gunna b some1 out there who loves u! just dont b mean 2 ppl and they wont b mean 2 u! i hope u find that one special person soon or later! but if u r there for ur friends we will always b there for you! i love your poems and they really touch my heart! just b nicer to some of us and i no that soon aguy will like u! u are a sweet girl but u can b quite mean sometimes! we will give u a chance just give us back one in return! i love you and i am always here for u!143 xoxo bff ~*MELISSA*~ |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Saturday, April 26 2003, 02:15 am Friends? Of what meaning is a friend? You see whom i thought were my friends hardly know a thing about me. And are all to blind to find out themselvs. They did know me but now know nothing. I have changed and so did all of you. But a friendship works 2 ways and i no longer will change who i am for you gyes. I am going to be myself from now on. And if none of you like it then i guess thatsyour problem. (not trying to be b****y but its time i let you all know.) I am glad you like my poems. - Leah |
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