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God
30 May, 2003
Author: Lil Lulu

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God is our everyday thing.
God is like water keeps
our souls nice and clean.
God is like toothpaste,
keeps us nice and bright.
He is like hairspray,
holds us all together.
God is like floss,
makes sure we get every little thing.
God is our love as if our power.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ben (67.123.244.245) -- Saturday, July 5 2003, 10:27 pm

This thing about God.....

Hey, Lil Lulu, I like your poem about God...I give it the yes nod... It's good to read someone who....Thinks about God, too! Thanks for your poem!!
clare (212.248.226.1) -- Wednesday, October 15 2003, 04:30 pm

brilliant

the poem is so good i have printed it out
and given them to churches
Amy (208.33.38.251) -- Saturday, November 29 2003, 05:14 am

GREAT!!!

thats a great poem!! i love it!!
 
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