Falling Apart
14 February, 2004
Author: LinzAy
Lost inside
I close my eyes
And all I see is you
Reaching out
I scream, I shout
But there's nothing that you do
Falling apart I'm breaking
Realizing it's my heart you're taking
Falling apart I'm dieing
As you leave me here...crying
Given in
I've let you win
And now I'm part of your game
Frozen here
To face my fears
As you put me to shame
Falling apart I'm breaking
Realizing it's my heart you're taking
Falling apart I'm dieing
As you leave me here...crying
I can't win this fight
Something here must be right
I can't save my own heart
I'm falling...apart
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| everett (209.240.207.249) -- Tuesday, February 17 2004, 08:21 am another very good piece of writing! that last line made the whole poem, it was perfect. i love the way you wrote this. i can tell you put your heart into it |
| LinzAy (65.40.22.241) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 03:26 am Tunkoo vedy vedy much!! I'm glad you enjoyed this. I was actually listening to the plum cd and started singing random words to the beginning beat and kept up the rest with it....that just sounded weird...anyway...glad you liked :) |
| XoForeverXo (24.75.6.35) -- Friday, July 9 2004, 05:42 am great poem! i especially like the ending...sumthing here must be right...good job i like a lot of ur poems! im going to comment on all of em! hehe |
| LinzAy (4.27.186.183) -- Tuesday, January 11 2005, 04:17 am WOW! SOrry i missed this comment! THanks sop much for it!! |
| sherry gillespie (69.76.93.240) -- Tuesday, January 1 2008, 05:32 am can i please use your poem? |
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