Confusion by LinzAy

Green is stop and red is go
No is yes and yes is no
Wrong is right and up is down
Here is there and then is now

I'm all mized up, so confused
I don't know what to do with you
I'm hurting but also feel no pain
I see the sun where there's only rain

I should walk away, just say goodbye
But I just keep smiling when I should cry
I sugarcoat everything between you and I
My heart is blinded by my own white lies

Red lights flashing everywhere
But red means go, so I don't care
I ask "Should I give up?" and you say yes
But yes means no so I'll stay I guess

Everyone's telling me this is wrong
But wrong is right, so I stand by you strong
I try to tell myself you'll only bring me down
But down is up since up is down

I'm anywhere that's here with you, if you don't care
So, I'm anywhere that's there with you since here is there
I was hurt then once by you somehow
So, why can't I realize that then will soon again be now

Love is hate and the truth is a lie
I love you and that's the truth - but why?

Jackie (147.31.4.4) -- Thursday, January 22 2004, 03:10 pm

Great!
Wow! What a great poem! I loved the way you played with words and opposites. Very good job indeed! Keep up the wonderful work

LinzAy (64.12.96.72) -- Thursday, January 22 2004, 06:37 pm

Jackie
Thankyou very much :)

Giselle (156.12.144.222) -- Thursday, January 22 2004, 06:50 pm

Loved your poem
Confused was a really gooood poem. I loved it. Much props.

Sweetvenom (61.1.200.252) -- Thursday, January 22 2004, 08:26 pm

Nice piece of work
Hey pal.Everyone goes thro'feeling.Very neatly laid.Hats off to you.

everett (209.240.207.249) -- Friday, January 23 2004, 07:01 am

Linz...
whoa....great poem! Very Interesting. wow seems like forever since we've talked. well once again....nice piece of work :)

Pamela (66.38.146.204) -- Sunday, January 25 2004, 08:32 pm

Unique
I loved the wording in this one Linz....it just flowed nicely together. And I love the contradictory/backwards theory of it all.

LinzAy (24.53.210.143) -- Sunday, January 25 2004, 11:04 pm

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Thankyou everyone :D

.....It has been forever since we talked Ev!

TaylorJames (212.85.21.178) -- Tuesday, April 12 2005, 04:10 pm

no title
i really like this poem, it makes sense in a confusing way if u get what i mean :P:P **taylor**

TAYLORJAMES (205.188.116.203) -- Saturday, July 16 2005, 05:25 am

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Thankyou vedy vedy much for your comment!!! :D

Stephani (69.150.241.8) -- Tuesday, October 17 2006, 01:15 am

hey
i really liked your poem and so i wasnted to ask if i can use it. thank you

Demica (173.45.193.151) -- Tuesday, July 7 2009, 06:09 pm

Exactly my feelings
i would like to use ur poem just on my page not saying its mines or anything but its just exactly what im feeling.

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