Forbidden by LinzAy

Here I sit in Eden
Bare for all - unashamed
I sit before the serpents tree
Where forbidden desires lay

A fruitful tree of temptation
A fruitful tree of sin
The apple I most desire
Is the forbidden

Serpents eyes stare through me
The wind carresses my naked soul
Messes my hair, chills my skin
The air grows cold

"I advocate this lust!"
I scream aloud for all to hear
Even though it scares me
As, the forbidden fruit, I near

Hesitant to grab this apple
Don't want to be condemned
A craving for the forbidden
Forgive me all - Amen

Capricorn (82.36.129.85) -- Monday, October 13 2003, 09:21 am

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Wow Linzay...this is wonderful. very vividly portrayed

Eli (216.165.188.210) -- Thursday, October 16 2003, 12:29 am

I know
I know exactly how you feel.

LinzAy (64.12.96.39) -- Thursday, October 16 2003, 09:52 pm

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Cap...thankyou!
Eli....Yea, it's frustrating when everybody thinks something is so horrible for you that they actually get mad at you for going for it. SO far so good with what im going for though.

Pamela (66.38.146.7) -- Saturday, November 15 2003, 11:41 pm

Oh My!
Who knew that my feelings for a man could be put into a metaphor with forbidden fruit! I loev this poem! I feel this way and it's driving me crazy!
But, it's not worth being kicked out of Eden.....

LinzAy (24.95.228.105) -- Wednesday, November 19 2003, 10:44 pm

Pamela....
Heh...yea, i know what you mean. Eden in this poem stands for my friendships with certain ppl. I don't think they should be judging who i like how they are..what if this person were soon to be the love of my life. Since i'm a big believer and dreamer of love i don't think i should let a frienship stop something.

:D Thankyou for the comment!!!! :D

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