There Lived A Girl
30 March, 2003
Author: LinzAy
Once upon a time there lived a girl
With shattered and broken dreams
Whose laugh was never heard
Whose smile was never seen
She was a girl of beauty
Perfect height, thin, amazing eyes
She was a girl of beauty
She was perfect but still not loved by guys
Once upon a time there lived a girl
With a heart she so badly wanted to give
Who wante nothing more than to feel safe
Who hated the fact that she had to live
She was a girl of beauty
Who soon wanted nothing more than to say goodbye
She was a girl of beauty
Even when she chose to die
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Seizure (67.33.163.29) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 10:02 am Amazing to me... the fact that this is very similar to the new one I posted, "Daddy's Little Girl." Well written. |
| LinzAy (64.12.96.8) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 10:07 am Yea..it is a lot like it. Glad ya liked it too :D |
| everett (66.138.28.4) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 07:05 pm yeah, great poem...the ending was very good! |
| LinzAy (64.12.96.70) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 10:43 pm Thankyou Everett :D |
| Martin Vann (63.208.61.197) -- Friday, May 16 2003, 08:39 pm LinzAy, Love is hard to find, we all know that, beauty, that comes easy to some, often, it is in their appearance, seldom in their hearts, however, LinzAy, you have both, and love will come, relax, let it find you, for it will. Someone is out there and has a heart, a heart made special for your heart, and when you meet, WOW! MartinV |
| LinzAy (64.12.96.70) -- Saturday, May 17 2003, 07:26 am Hey Martin! It's been a while since i've heard from ya! Thanks for everything you said, it means a lot.....as always:D |
| LinzAy (64.12.96.70) -- Saturday, May 17 2003, 09:05 am woops....Long time no "HEAR" lol......there goes pointing out that i should be blonde again!! ;) |
| Brandi (152.163.252.99) -- Sunday, May 18 2003, 12:13 am hey im blonde and i take offense!! lol j/p. smetimes i think that saying is true... anywayz... good poem i would have liked to hear more of the story like why she couldnt get guys or why she had broken dreams. but otherwise it was great |
| brandi (152.163.252.99) -- Sunday, May 18 2003, 12:15 am sry forgot to say that maybe u did include that stuff and it just went over my head as many things tend to. |
| LinzAy (152.163.252.99) -- Sunday, May 18 2003, 10:47 pm Well, if there were explanations and they did go over your head...it's only because ur blonde ;) LOL....just messin I dunno really what her problems were, why she couldn't be loved.......but that's what her broken dreams were.....love. Thankyou :D |
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