Humpty Dumpty
29 March, 2003
Author: LinzAy
Humpty Dumpty sat on that wall
And many say he fell
I say Humpty was pushed
I say homicide took him from this life of hell
I once sat on my own wall
Tall and sturdy, I felt so safe
Then others started gathering round
Invading my personal space
Everywhere I looked were faces of evil
People that only wanted to do me wrong
Lies, deciet, fraud, and pain
All of wich had made me less strong
I started to crack under the pressure
I tried my best but could barely hang on at all
They all saw me weakening
And pushed me off my sturdy wall
I fell a lengthy fall to the ground and broke
A million pieces of me scattered
My life, my goals, my integrity
All of me had been shattered
But unlike Humpty, I was left stranded
No kings horses, no kings men
I was left a broken persona non grata
Never to be put back together again
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Seizure (67.33.163.29) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 10:00 am I can relate to this one... |
| LinzAy (64.12.96.14) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 10:06 am I'm glad ya liked it but i'm sorry ya can relate to it. |
| everett (66.138.28.4) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 06:55 pm I really like this one, im glad ya sent it in ;) |
| LinzAy (205.188.208.138) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 07:01 pm Thankya Mr Ev!! |
| luc (68.74.149.30) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 11:50 pm i liked how you used the comparasn to humpty dumpty, nice idea.. |
| Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Wednesday, May 7 2003, 02:18 am Excellent comparison with Humpty Dumpty....excellent read....excellent poem!! |
| LinzAy (152.163.189.69) -- Wednesday, May 7 2003, 03:42 am Thankyou Luc.... :D And thankyou very much Cap! Glad ya liked it as much as ya did! :D |
| you know who (206.193.60.133) -- Tuesday, May 13 2003, 08:25 pm this is a really good poe one of the only ones i liked good work. write ore poems. |
| LinzAy (152.163.252.197) -- Tuesday, May 13 2003, 08:43 pm Well, i'm glad to see that you liked my poem ...and that you didn't harrass me like you have the other great poets on this site........ |
| Bench (192.168.0.120) -- Monday, May 19 2003, 03:09 am I like the comparison! |
| LinzAy (152.163.252.197) -- Monday, May 19 2003, 03:22 am Thanks :) |
| tori542000 (66.212.207.59) -- Saturday, August 30 2003, 09:21 pm I love this poem, I can definatly relate to this poem. I like ow you used Humpty Dumpty as a comparison, I think it makes the poem better that way. |
| LinzAy (24.73.236.194) -- Saturday, November 1 2003, 12:25 am Wow.....missed a comment.....thats what i get from not havin my pc..thanks! |
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