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Tomorrow
14 March, 2003
Author: LinzAy

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Today I feel so helpless. All my walls are closing in.
I've got to keep on pushing-gather strength from
deep within. I've slowly fallen into depression, thank
God there's always a way out. I've just got to change
my direction. I must take another route.
But today is just too hectic. I can't today, I'm just
too weak. Too weak to stand, too weak to walk, even
too weak to speak. Crying uncontrollably-but why I
just can't say. Crying uncontrollably because all I
can think about is today.
Interruptions from solitude fill me with anger but at
the same time joy. I've kept myself quiet because of
depression, most just think I'm coy. Today is another
misery add to my list. Today is another journey - a
consequence, a risk.
Today I must have cried a million times - there's
nothing more to do. I thought of death - I thought of
life - can't find an emotion of refuge.
I'm getting headaches from all the hurt, the pain and
suffering. I'm getting sick of it all staying the same
and never rearranging.
I'm getting sick of today with all it's pain and sorrow.
I'm getting sick of today - thankgod there's always
tomorrow.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Roy (152.163.189.136) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 01:55 pm

Quiet time

Tears so good for your soul/depression a dark bottomless pit/dreams make my day to be with you and read your words or hear your voice to touch my heart/my are quick to stand to run to your side/words releases just what you wrote so pure for tomarrow is here
Red Dragon (210.14.4.46) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 02:27 pm

~..~

Linz, we all have our limits but if stop hoping, its like silencing every beat of our heart...so what's the reason in living then? me, i always try to push myself up whenever i fall...you get stronger everytime you surpass a challenge and everyday is challenge for me...nice writing though....inspiring....makes my heart beat faster.... :)
LinzAy (205.188.209.9) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 03:52 pm

Roy & R.D.

Roy...thankyou for ur words...a poem within a comment...

R.D. Thankyou for your comment. In fact, double thankyou because ti inspired me to write something.....impiration.....wonder if it's that inspiration i need that i was talkin about on the message board?

Thanks guys!
Crystal (204.32.64.150) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 10:44 pm

BRAVO! BRAVO!

Wow,LinzAy! Can't believe how good you are at this poetry. This poem seemed like a song to me, I really loved it! Keep writing!
LinzAy (152.163.189.136) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 10:59 pm

Crystal

*takes a bow* thankyou! thankyou!!

LOL....seriously though...thankyou Crystal!!
everett (67.29.160.4) -- Friday, April 18 2003, 03:55 am

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this really was a great poem Linzay. you are a very talented writer. i could relate so much to the first line
LinzAy (205.188.209.9) -- Friday, April 18 2003, 04:42 am

Ev......

Aw! I'm sorry you can relate to the first line of this poem.....but thankyou so much for your comment!!

U better leave comments!! LOL......dont worry everyone, little inside joke between us!
LinzAy (205.188.209.8) -- Tuesday, April 22 2003, 03:41 pm

RED DRAGON

You inspired me to write a poem...it's called Silenced Beat......it should be on here soon.....
 
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