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Yesterday's Poem
6 April, 2003
Author: LinzAy

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Yesterdays poem was filled with love
Filled with emotions for you
It spoke words of how much you meant to me
It spoke of my feelings so true

Yesterdays poem was written with a smile
Written with a warmth in my heart
It made me closer to you somehow
Made us feel less apart

But, yesterdays poem was yesterdays poem
Todays is something new
Todays is written with a tear in my eye
Todays is a goodbye to you

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 04:05 am

wow LinzAy

I love this poem!!!!! Nice work!
unknown (10.61.2.107) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 04:11 pm

Deep

Your poem was so deep in emotion and i could tell you put your heart and soul in your writting.I love this poem and the way you wright.Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Raul (208.254.109.22) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 04:20 pm

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i love all your poems, you are really a true poet, i wish i could express my feelings like you can. Great poem! Thanks for sharing your emotions and how you feel inside, dont worry, you'll find your someone!
c.r. (208.254.109.22) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 05:53 pm

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that is exactly how i used to feel! i would write poems to my boyfriend to expess how i felt about him and when he broke my heart i wrote my poems w/ tears in my eyes. great poem! i really like it!
LinzAy (64.12.96.139) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 08:34 pm

Thanks guys!

:) Thanx for all the comments guys! I'm glad you enjoyed my writings guys!! Yea...Truly how i felt, really did have tears in my eyes....but...eh....whatever! haha......
everett (67.29.162.218) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 04:20 am

told ya before...

that this poem was great. i was fortunate to read it before it was posted. great poem linzay
LinzAy (205.188.209.70) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 04:57 am

Told ya before too

I already said thanks too but thanks again ev!!!
Megzy (67.195.45.136) -- Wednesday, May 21 2003, 10:47 pm

wonderful

u read & commented on 1 of my poems so i decided i would return the favor...that poem was relly good... it expressed ur feelings very well... it was short and sweet. again i say wonderful!
LinzAy (216.142.52.170) -- Thursday, May 22 2003, 04:05 am

Megzy

Well, thanks for takin the time to check out one of mine! And thanks for the comment! :)
 
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