Night Sky
7 April, 2003
Author: LinzAy
The sun is setting
...And so are we...
The sun is saying it's goodbye
...And so are we...
Clouds fill the night sky
Just as they fill my mind and heart
The night sky cries
I would too if I felt comepletely torn apart
But just as a mother lets her child down gently from her embrace
I have let myself down
Just as a mother knows best for her child
I knew this moment was coming now
The rain stops pouring
As do my feelings and emotions for you
The nigth sky clears
And so do thoughts of us two
The moon shines bright
And I smile
The wind blows through my hair
Haven't felt this good in a while
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Red Dragon (210.14.4.46) -- Thursday, April 10 2003, 03:34 pm its like being on the countryside huh? reminescing the long neglected feeling...heheheh...love the ending. you are a lady of chaste and simple thoughts... |
| luc (68.74.78.32) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 03:39 am stuned.. i liked it rather inspiring and .. really can help someone. trying to get ovwer things.. nice one.. |
| LinzAy (64.12.96.134) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 08:37 pm Thankyou so much guys! Lady of chaste and simple thoughts....is this why Martin calls me Lady L? Hehe.. Stunned ya Luc? I've never done that before have i?! Hehe.....glad you liked it! |
| Crystal (206.214.69.53) -- Sunday, April 13 2003, 11:27 pm Really liked this one, LinzAy, I've got to admit, your poetry is inspirational,...nothing more |
| LinzAy (152.163.189.97) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 02:46 am Thankyou Crystal........glad you found it inspirational. Nothing more...is that a comment or....i dunno....but tunkoo..... |
| Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Tuesday, April 15 2003, 12:59 am As crystal says...`inspirational'!! |
| LinzAy (205.188.209.73) -- Tuesday, April 15 2003, 03:56 am Thankyou cap!....glad ya found it inspirational too:) |
| Crystal (206.214.64.100) -- Tuesday, April 15 2003, 08:40 pm Sorry about the mix up about the "nothing more" part, I was saying inspirational as the highest comment, no a let down, like going past all other things I could have said. But if this sounds any better, your poem, was all the way to the top. |
| LinzAy (64.12.96.134) -- Wednesday, April 16 2003, 01:13 am Hehe....i tend to overthink things sometimes, thankyou for clearing it up!! I'm glad you lke this that much! Thanks for the comment again! |
| Roy (205.188.208.135) -- Wednesday, April 16 2003, 05:01 pm Thank you, you take me to my pritate corner of thoughts |
| LinzAy (64.12.96.134) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 12:51 am Thankyou so much Roy! |
| Roy (152.163.189.97) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 02:42 am Your first- leader and then I will write again but I doubt that I could do better than this, but I have one in mind for you,and Reddragon and let him know that I am young 50+ist and Leah06 touched me so much on her words also |
| LinzAy (152.163.189.97) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 04:55 am Aw...ur words are too kind...thankyou Roy! You have one in mind for me? |
| Sunshine (168.184.90.11) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 04:58 pm This was a very pretty poem yet though it was sad because it ment an ending,it was also happy cause you think of the new beginnings... (coincidence)=) i love your imagintion. and i live you lots buddy. |
| Roy (152.163.189.97) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 06:15 pm it is the one I conjurd(sp?) for each of you/Tomarrow is now prreettttyy |
| LinzAy (152.163.189.97) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 11:02 pm Hey Buddy!! Glad ya liked it!! Yea, sad but for a good reason in the end.......love you 2 buddy! thankyou Roy.....hehe...yupyup tomorrow is now prreettttyy! hehe |
| Roy (64.12.96.134) -- Friday, April 18 2003, 01:23 am Yes LinAy what happen did Night SKY have a voice? |
| Sunshine (168.184.90.11) -- Monday, April 21 2003, 05:00 pm Hey, Whats wrong with tomarrow being prreettttyy?? It is so. Sometimes I think its fun to express your amazment as a little kid would. A voice?, wow, I love to read how people reaspond to the magical words of a poem. To think that a night sky could have a voice, is very imaginative. |
| LinzAy (205.188.209.76) -- Monday, April 21 2003, 05:45 pm Roy...if in voice you mean did i write it from the heart completely yes.....it speaks my heart.... Buddy....lol...nothing is wrong with prrreetttyyy.....uh, yea...nothing...hehe |
| Roy (205.188.209.76) -- Monday, April 21 2003, 06:00 pm I heard the voice of your words that sang in the depths of my heart and how I love it's song,one I would like to hear everyday. |
| LinzAy (205.188.209.76) -- Monday, April 21 2003, 06:10 pm Aw! Thankyou Roy... |
| Martin Vann (67.30.66.195) -- Monday, April 21 2003, 07:06 pm LinzAy; I can not find the words to reply, to such a poem as yours. Expressions of a mother/lover, and we ALL know how mothers love their child. Yet, you have the strength, to lay this baby in the ground, for your heart told you, it was coming to an end. Such courage you have expressed, to lay love, like you own baby into the ground. You have gone farther with these words, LinzAy, than I hope you will ever, truly, realize. My pen lies at rest, a salute to this poem. And in humble honor, sheds it heart, felt ink, in honor of you, and for this poem, for the words go beyond the depths of words and "tear" into the soul. You have laid before our human hearts, the greatest love, any can ever, call "lost," a child or love, both, one in the same. We who read your words, OH, LinzAy, what can we do, but weep! For such a loss, and to see your courage, to give it up. May love that will survive, one day suckle at your loving breast, and live forever, with you and you warm, strong, loving heart. MartinV This one, LinzAy, got to me! |
| LinzAy (152.163.189.97) -- Tuesday, April 22 2003, 03:26 am Gawd! I love ya! Who doesn't?!?! Thankyou for such a beautiful comment Martin!! Didn't know this poem would touch everyone the way that it has......but io guess that's what happens when things come straight from the heart....... |
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