To Be by LinzAy

I've looked into your eyes
And have been left breathless every time
I've listened to your voice
And have felt the shivers go down my spine
I've felt your skin so soft
And have wanted to feel you since, for forever and more
I've seen you give love
And now it's something I'm longing for
I've told you partly how I felt
And have to tell you now to it's full extent
I've wanted to be yours for so long
And have the feeling that it is meant
...............To Be...............
The one held in your arms
You, the one that's held in mine
To be so in love with each other
That we lose all track of time
To be the one to whom you whisper sweet nothings
And you, the one who hears my replies
To be with the one who won't let anything get between us
No matter how hard anyone tries
To be blessed to have someone like you
Would be more than anyone could ask
To be so lucky to be with you
I'm falling in love, and fast

Red Dragon (210.14.4.51) -- Wednesday, April 2 2003, 09:27 am

Hmmmm ~..~
Lucky guy, he is....to have captured the heart of a lady chaste and wise....

LinzAy (64.12.97.12) -- Wednesday, April 2 2003, 08:33 pm

Lady of chaste and wise
Hehe.....well, i say thankyou! But, no one has quite captured my heart just yet....i don't think?

Martin Vann (65.57.62.203) -- Wednesday, April 2 2003, 10:09 pm

Falling In Love Fast?
LinzAy;

All comments are based upon the poem, falling fast? After all you have shared with Mr. Wonderful, what could be left, except a blood transfusion, between each other, that is. Two lines you speak, "have felt your skin so soft, (doesn't sound like a hand shake to me, could be wrong) second, "I've seen you give love," okay, I'll give you that one.

Perhaps, LinzAy, being the writter that you are, you reeled me in and put me where you wanted me, and enjoy all my senseless comments. Once again and I'm sure I will say it a-gain, Lady L, your are goooooood!

Enjoyed your poem, why am I so hard on me?

MartinV

LinzAy (64.12.96.43) -- Wednesday, April 2 2003, 11:41 pm

Lady L....I like that!
I really like these names you guys are giving me!! They make me feel special!!

As for "felt your skin so soft", wasn't referring to anything sexual if that's what ya meant. I'm actually very strict on myself about that stuff.
Lol.....everything but a blood transfusion..you're hilarious Martin! Everyone's gotta love ya! Thanks for the comment!!

everett (67.29.162.133) -- Thursday, April 3 2003, 07:03 am

no title
another great poem Linzay. i love ur writing!

LinzAy (152.163.188.69) -- Thursday, April 3 2003, 07:23 am

and i urs!
hehe.....thanx Ev!!! luv urs 2!!!

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