Just A Feeling by LinzAy

A flower blooms
And for the first time, a baby cries
The rain is cleared by a rainbow
The anger in her dies
A beautiful painted landscape
Two people joined as one
A calm spreads across the land
Happiness is won
Beautiful green grass to lay in
The suns' reflection on a lake
Waves hitting the shore at the beach
A first date
Friend that truly care
Family that will never leave
A cute old couple
A God in whom I believe
Memories captured on film
The leaves on the trees turning red
And though all these things make me want to smile
Inside I still feel dead

everett (67.29.162.133) -- Thursday, April 3 2003, 06:59 am

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ya know, this is one of the best poems ive ever read. i loved the last line. the last line sums up exactly how i feel also.

LinzAy (152.163.188.198) -- Thursday, April 3 2003, 07:21 am

one of best?
really?!? hehe, kewl!!! yea,it's kinda how i've been feeling lately...sucks. i'm glad it turned out good as i think it did...it's one of my fav of mine...

everett (67.29.161.142) -- Thursday, April 3 2003, 08:42 am

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yeah i really liked it! very good!

LinzAy (152.163.188.198) -- Thursday, April 3 2003, 10:25 am

again
Thanx again Everett!!

Elizabetta (205.188.209.6) -- Friday, April 4 2003, 12:06 am

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yeah I really really like it too... funny how things can be so good, but so empty.

LinzAy (205.188.209.6) -- Friday, April 4 2003, 09:17 am

Betta
Omigawd! I know!!

Thanx for the comment

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