Unwanted
23 February, 2003
Author: LinzAy
I'm disheartened
Haven't once been loved
Or looked at in joy
I'm doubted
Not smart enough to all
My emotions are played with like a toy
I'm uncollected
A shell still in the sand
A coin still being passed around
I'm unchosen
Still waiting on the sidelines
Haven't yet been picked out
I'm unwanted
Thrown away
Tossed to the side
I'm discarded
Kicked to the curb
Left to die
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| everett (67.29.160.131) -- Wednesday, March 26 2003, 05:59 am ive felt like that before, so many times. you really wrote it perfectly. |
| LinzAy (205.188.208.38) -- Wednesday, March 26 2003, 07:10 am thankyou...doesn't this feeling suck! |
| everett (67.29.160.52) -- Wednesday, March 26 2003, 06:35 pm yes, yes it does lol |
| Sunshine (168.184.90.11) -- Thursday, March 27 2003, 05:58 pm My buddy, you'll never be unwanted by me!! I love it, and its very true to feel that ways sometimes. once again, you have awed me with you words... luv yas buddy =) |
| LinzAy (152.163.189.233) -- Thursday, March 27 2003, 08:19 pm Aw thankyou Buddy! |
| ~..~ (210.14.4.51) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 01:57 pm Here are my arms that in them you may find warmth...Lady, your face is creased by the lines of wrinkles from your sorrow...my hand will cup your face...hush, you are not unwanted...hush, its alright now...peace will come like soft morning dew.... |
| Red Dragon (210.14.4.51) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 01:58 pm Am here.... |
| LinzAy (205.188.208.38) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 10:31 pm Aw! Thanks R.D.!!! |
| Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Wednesday, April 2 2003, 03:53 pm Hey LinzAy, this poem is me, when I was your age. Just hang in there, your time will come and it will be sooo special that you will know it was worth waiting for! Take care! |
| LinzAy (64.12.96.134) -- Wednesday, April 2 2003, 09:29 pm Thankyou Cap!!! |
| leah (24.72.92.94) -- Sunday, April 6 2003, 04:35 am lol are you really that left out? sorry to hear it my best wishes go out to you.... |
| LinzAy (205.188.208.38) -- Monday, April 7 2003, 07:49 am heh, sometimes ifeel i am. But then again a lot of people sometimes over think things...i may be one of those people....who knows.....? heh heh |
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