Too Much To Ask
19 February, 2003
Author: LinzAy
Was it too much to ask
When I just asked for the truth?
When I asked about your feelings
Why couldn’t your words be true?
Was it too much to ask for honesty
When your words were spoken?
Thank God I didn’t let myself fall
I just would’ve been broken
I saw it all coming, I’m not stupid
Why do you think I didn’t call?
Thank God instead of running to you
I walked to you slowly-almost a crawl
I’m assuming it was too much to ask
After all, you had so much on your mind
And no need to worry, which you’re probably not
-I’ll be just fine
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| everett (209.240.198.62) -- Wednesday, February 26 2003, 05:53 am this was a good poem! I sensed some frustration, nice piece of writing! :) |
| LinzAy (205.188.208.74) -- Wednesday, February 26 2003, 10:00 am definitely some frustration.....!! thanx! |
| barb (66.46.230.205) -- Monday, March 3 2003, 09:04 pm get mad at that person that didn't show their true feelings. You did nothing wrong, they did they made you frustrated and angry. That's how I handle things is I get angry if the person chits on me Hhaaaa good writing keep it up |
| LinzAy (64.12.96.41) -- Wednesday, March 5 2003, 08:26 am Thankyou Barb! And trust me! i got mad all right! lol..... |
| akire (203.167.92.2) -- Friday, August 8 2003, 04:13 am Your piece is so good, i can relate on the situation. I ask my tart but never found a word to know how we'll gonna be after the storm. |
| LinzAy (24.73.236.194) -- Saturday, November 1 2003, 12:38 am a lil late of a response but thankyou :) |
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