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Another
4 February, 2003
Author: LinzAy

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I glance up and realize it's another night
Another night of having no one beside me
Nobody to hold
I listen for sound, look for light
Try to find some strength to keep me from being weak
To keep me from feeling cold

I look around and see another sun has set
Another day has left me to me, myself and I
So very much alone
I touch my cheek to feel it wet
Wet from tears i just spilled and didn't realize I cried
Tears once unknown

I close my eyes and her another dusk setting in
Another dusk I spend in complete isolation
With nobody near
I closed my eyes, wish I could close my ears - don't want them open
Don't want them to hear the place of desolation
The place that has appeared

Giving up the strain, I open my eyes again, another sight unwanted I see
Me and nothing else on this barren open land of emotions
With lakes of tears
No matter which direction I turn, I'm still left with just me
And no matter what I speak or all my different motions
I'm still left with my biggest fear

Another night, sunset, or dusk spent alone

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Martin Vann (67.75.182.28) -- Friday, February 7 2003, 06:40 pm

Very Lonely Lady here.

I feel the lonely desperation, you use words like falling tears. Nobody should be so alone. This makes me sad, someone could be so all alone, but I know we do exist. Yet, "I" feel that you will rise, like the Phoenix from its own ashes and you will see a cloudless sky. And as reward for all your suffering, love will come and with its gentle touch, remove the tears from your pretty eyes. When you open your eyes again, you will see love and never be along again.

Your work is beautiful, its sad, but from it "I" think of hope, that is what you gave to me. I tried to share that in my reply.

Thanks,
Martin V
LinzAy (64.12.102.32) -- Saturday, February 8 2003, 03:34 am

Hope

Definitely hope.....thankyou for your words....
LinzAy (152.163.194.209) -- Saturday, February 8 2003, 12:19 pm

......

Actually....Loneliness which leads to hope and desperation for someone to be there for me, to hold me and be there for me and love me.......damn it...i need a guy....i'm just so picky....i want someone that will respect me and and my morals...and that's hard to find in guys these days:( so it leaves me lonely and hopeful
LinzAy (152.163.194.209) -- Saturday, February 8 2003, 12:20 pm

hehe...oops..

ha...wrote be there for me twice....im such a dork!
LinzAy (205.188.208.107) -- Friday, February 21 2003, 10:52 am

Guess what?!

I'm not alone anymore!!!!!!!
LinzAy (205.188.208.166) -- Tuesday, April 22 2003, 04:15 pm

Guess What again!

LOL....you all already know but it goes with the low of my string of comments here or whatever!

I'm alone again!! lol........
 
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