Warped Affliction
11 January, 2003
Author: LinzAy
Make me suffer
Make me bleed
Make me cry more tears
Scar my heart
Scar my soul
Encourage all my fears
Pull me apart
Pull me down
Pull me away from happiness
Shred my insides
Shred my mind
Shred me and leave me a mess
Blind me of sight
Blind me of life
Blind me of everything right
Haunt my memories
Haunt my thoughts
Haunt my every night
Take my smile
Take my dreams
And throw them all away
Tear down my realm
Tear down reality
Leave me in disarray
Peel my layers
Peel my skin
Peel away everything that should be
Rip my heart out
Rip my world away
Rip apart everything that makes me
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| guy (65.57.71.52) -- Sunday, January 12 2003, 02:44 pm Sure like this one. Nice work, like the style, the lay out,joining the words. Your very good. Hope to see more of your work. a smile! |
| LinzAy (205.188.208.40) -- Sunday, January 12 2003, 06:09 pm Thankyou guy....it's kinda one of my pers-ka-nal favorites. Glad ya like it! :) |
| everett (209.240.198.61) -- Monday, January 13 2003, 02:27 am Another awesome poem. i love the way it was written, it was perfect. I enjoyed reading it as well as all your writing :) |
| LinzAy (205.188.208.40) -- Tuesday, January 14 2003, 03:00 am Thankx Everett.....thought u mite like that one....:) |
| Xeracy (204.113.161.186) -- Tuesday, January 14 2003, 07:34 pm I really like it. It was very graphic. |
| LinzAy (152.163.188.34) -- Tuesday, January 14 2003, 09:14 pm Thanku! :) |
| lisa (65.137.79.70) -- Monday, February 24 2003, 01:32 am this is a grreat poem cuz it really shows how a person in depression can become desperate and at the same time sickntired of people treating them bad and causing them so much pain...its almost like a person who has given up - but this person could have also hit rock bottom (so to speak), and will rise above all this affliction to spiritual understanding!! keep it up linZay...and u will become the 'Female Shakespeare' of the future!! muaaahh, hugznkissies 2 mah gababooblessss :D |
| LinzAy (205.188.209.48) -- Wednesday, February 26 2003, 11:01 am hehe thanx Aunt Lisa...but i'm not too sure if i'll ever meet up to Shakespeare....damn was he a good writer. But thankyou!!! ;) |
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