Cold Flame by LinzAy

Smoke kissed the dark cerulean and scarlet sky
From a fire that supposedly couldn't be extinguished
Flames so hot they burned the soul
Any emotion that tried to withstand this flame was vanquished
A scarred heart, a scarred soul
A scarred mind from pleasurable pain
Love and passion, affectionate predilection
Nothing should've been able to eclipse this fire-a thought so vain
Because slowly a cold drizzle of loathly tears
Transformed into a horrendous downpour
The fire was dieing, the smokey flames were crying
Passion could no longer make these flames brilliantly roar
Something went wrong with this flame of passion
So decieving, just not to the naked eye
Instead of love and passion it's pity and hope
So the fire burst into a quick blaze to say its goodbye
The once so beautiful flame of the heart
Now has such a sad, sad name
Hurt and pain, sorrow and strife
Now all that's left, all you can see, is the flicker of a cold flame

Elizabetta (64.12.96.43) -- Sunday, January 12 2003, 10:43 pm

Awesome!
Wow...I really liked this poem. Good imagery and emotion~

LinzAy (205.188.208.139) -- Monday, January 13 2003, 12:21 am

TY
Thanx Elizabetta!!!!

everett (209.240.198.61) -- Monday, January 13 2003, 02:24 am

very Good
hey Linzay, that was a great poem. i really like your writing.

LUC (67.37.228.68) -- Monday, January 13 2003, 02:58 am

another poem that with a nice ending.. it embraced me there for a sec or more.. in other owrds i love this poem :)

LinzAy (205.188.208.139) -- Tuesday, January 14 2003, 03:01 am

Thanx
Thanks pplz!!:) Yea...my fav lines are the last few ones.. But yea..thanx guys

Ashley (24.143.29.45) -- Saturday, January 25 2003, 01:07 am

I really like your peom. Keep on writing

LinzAy (205.188.208.139) -- Thursday, January 30 2003, 10:59 am

Ashley
Thanx girl, i will! :)

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