Evelyn's Tears by LinzAy

Isolation-she just wants to be left alone
Communication-none, she's in her own zone
She's shaking uncontrollably from all the pain she's just received
Something tormenting her this much is just too hard to believe
Deterioration-everything she's known is leaving her side
Destination-depression is the place to where she has cried
The pain is stabbing her in the back as she's slowly being torn down
Doing nothing but letting hurt consume her, in her own tears she's going to drown

Somebody save Evelyn from all the pain she feels
Somebody save Evelyn from everything that's real
Distract her from the cruelness that this abstruse life can bring
Somebody save Evelyn from the tears she's suffering

Repetion-seems the same old damage has been done again
Intervention-pain's in between her and doors that are wide open
She's turning her back on everything, even those who love her most
Turning into something she's not, suicide's too close

I can't get through to her
I've tried and tried
Seems all that she's done lately
Is cried and cried
Don't want to give up on this girl
Want to keep her alive

Somebody save Evelyn from all the pain she feels
Somebody save Evelyn from everything that's real
Distract her from the cruelness that this abstruse life can bring
Somebody save Evelyn from the tears she's suffering

everett (209.240.198.61) -- Monday, January 13 2003, 02:17 am

wow
This was good. I can tell there is alot of emotion in this poem. its very deep and it has a realness to it that hits home. good poem, i really liked it.

Luc (67.37.228.68) -- Monday, January 13 2003, 02:40 am

thinking
left me thinking.. like everett said.. has a realness to it.. and just starting wondering if it is true your just desguising it and such.. though hopefully im wrong and hopefully my imagination is running wild cuz if not man these pink bunnies will make some fine money if i sold them...O.o

LinzAy (205.188.209.11) -- Tuesday, January 14 2003, 03:03 am

realness
I guess there's a little truth that was put into this poem....but not all that much. i probably wrote it when i was in a depressed mood or something. And um...i'll buy a bunny!

Aimee: ) (202.89.42.223) -- Sunday, January 9 2005, 09:36 pm

wooooooooooooow linzay
awesome poem!!!LOVE IT

LinzAy (4.27.186.183) -- Monday, January 10 2005, 02:59 am

Aimee
OMG! lol...I didn't think any of my other poems other than recently submitted would be checked out...glad ya liked!

Aimee: ) (210.55.106.113) -- Monday, January 10 2005, 09:56 pm

linzay
i just go through reading poems that sound instersting!!!i have a friend called evelyn so yea...
aimee

LinzAy (4.27.186.183) -- Tuesday, January 11 2005, 04:04 am

aimee
lol..oh ok! can understand how it grabbed your attention then! thanks for the read

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