Sunset
24 September, 2002
Author: LinzAy
The sky is a pink and purple
With clouds of a deep sea blue
There's so much i could think of
But all that comes to mind is you
The night is quickly coming
And the stars are getting brighter
With every minute that passes by
Everything in my world is getting quieter
Too much silence
Leaves too much time to think
The sky is now the dakest of blue
With no more signs of pink
The moon is smiling at me
Like I wish you could right now
And so I start to think of your lips
Want to ask you to kiss me, but how?
The stars give me a wink
Which is what you ocassionally do
So as my mind went blank a moment
All thoughts went back to you
The clouds pass by with a sigh
Along with the singing of the wind
And, again, that's somehow linked to you
I justed leaned my head back and grinned
The trees sway to a silent tune
Dancing the night away
Music, fun, and a certain someone
Thoughts of you-are they here to stay?
From the last time I saw you
To the first day we met
Every thought was of you
As I watched the sunset
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| barb (206.191.91.80) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 03:38 pm Linzay this is very good I love the way you said "the stars winked the way you do" this is beautiful . |
| everett (209.240.198.61) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 04:46 pm Indeed this is a good poem, i like, i like :) |
| Babygurl (216.135.36.193) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 04:46 pm Beautiful poem, the words just seem to flow together. Keep writing girl. |
| Tiffany (68.10.181.250) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 08:26 pm I agree with them up above. It had a good flow and it was so beautiful. |
| Luc (65.43.119.84) -- Saturday, October 26 2002, 12:33 am like so many have already said it just seems to flow together. i like how you compared everything to that speacial someone of yours. beautifully written. ^.^ |
| LinzAy (209.240.198.61) -- Saturday, October 26 2002, 12:42 am Thankyou everyone! I have a few personal favs of mine and this just happens to be one of them...hehe I guess i never really thought too much of my poetry until i started submitting my poems onto this site and get comments like this from other great poets...Thanks guys |
| Pamela (66.38.146.118) -- Monday, January 27 2003, 01:40 am I didn't even see this one until today - but is it ever beautifully written. Sunsets are my favorite thing and I think there is no better comparison you could have made. |
| LinzAy (205.188.209.137) -- Thursday, January 30 2003, 10:57 am Thanx Pamela...im glad that someone who loves sunsets was able to feel or visualize a poem i wrote that had comparisons of a beautiful sunset in it. |
| Pamela (66.38.146.169) -- Thursday, February 6 2003, 05:03 am Anyone who does not love sunsets or sunrises has serious issues. They are the only pure thing left in this corrupted world - and we are blessed enough with it's presence twice a day! |
| LinzAy (152.163.188.231) -- Friday, February 7 2003, 08:53 am I agree!! |
| Martin Vann (65.56.172.32) -- Sunday, February 9 2003, 09:26 pm Was this real, or another trip to dreamersreality? I felt this was real, the hearts were real, was it REAL or just another lovely gift you shared with us? Years ago when I was a Marine stationed in San Clemente, CA. I watched the sunset, biggest, yellow/orange ball I had ever seen. This is true, listen to me..., As the bottom of the sun began to touch the sea, I clould actually, see flames around the edges of the sun as it slipped in to the sea. Now, what I saw were the flames and that was all, the sun slowly vanished, deep into the sea. In your poem, Sunset, I saw the above sunset again, after all these years. The big difference this time was that because of your poem, I heard my setting sun "sizzle" as it touched the sea. Lot of love in this one lady, Thanks, MartinV |
| LinzAy (64.12.103.36) -- Monday, February 10 2003, 05:12 am Well Martin. I wrote this poem mostly for that 1st class jerk...b4 he broke up with me of course, even b4 we started going out. And the sunset was so beautiful that i nite wrote the poem so i worked him and the sunset in together and my feelings and this poem was the ending result. |
| LinzAy (152.163.194.183) -- Monday, February 10 2003, 09:12 am I also meant to write in that last reply about your sunset. I bet that was so beautiful. And i'm so flattered that one of my poems could make you relive that moment! |
| Sunshine (64.12.97.9) -- Friday, February 28 2003, 07:48 am Buddy, i like to wonder fo who this poem was about, but its just something that we dont talk about. but this poem just reflected on how i felt also, so i can relate, ive never read this one. but its now one of my favorites. it can be for a relation that is good and for one that went bad. You never cese to amaze me. i love you girl. |
| LinzAy (152.163.188.231) -- Friday, February 28 2003, 09:55 am :) Yea.....we dont talk about it do we? But anyways....I'm glad you like it buddy!! I love you too! OOO! did i tell ya that my 2nd poem book is full and that i'm started in the book you got me for christmas two friggin christmases ago?! Can't remember... anyway! Luv Ya!!! |
| Sunshine (152.163.188.195) -- Friday, February 28 2003, 11:03 am Yeah,you did tell me and im so excited... cantwait till you fill that one up too! if you ever do want to talk about it, its fine with me. i kinda hope you open up that one little barrier that is between us. but no matter what, its all good.. and it worked out better in the end |
| Martin Vann (65.57.61.136) -- Friday, February 28 2003, 07:32 pm A lot going on here, poets, real people, loving hearts, excitement, passion, memories, friends. I feel Sunshine in all of this. Dreamer, Dreamer, Dreamer, Thank You. Real people who share their lives and secret thoughts, just overwhelming. MartinV |
| LinzAy (64.12.97.9) -- Friday, February 28 2003, 11:24 pm Yes Martin, me a dn April are real close friends and we love eachother very much.....And i'm glad u feel your patr of all this love. You've got mine...you're an awesome friend on here....and yes Dreamer...thankyou for this site!!!!! |
| amy gleeson (172.23.68.5) -- Thursday, March 4 2004, 01:40 am that poem sound so nice i love sun sets i love watching them with some one u really love |
| LinzAy (152.163.252.131) -- Thursday, March 4 2004, 10:21 am I'm glad you like!! |
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