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You
14 February, 2003
Author: Lisa H

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The saddest days
Turn so bright
On the darkest nights
U are my light
When I'm confused
U make me see
When I'm in doubt
U make me believe
When ur with me
I'm filled with happiness
When we're apart
I'm overwhelmed with emptiness
I can count on u
To make my day
The jokes that u tell
Make everything okay
I feel myself smile
When ur in sight
As long as ur with me
Everything will be alright
I am so blessed
to have u with me
I hope you know
I love u deeply.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Mark Spencer (152.163.194.209) -- Sunday, February 16 2003, 01:44 pm

Very nice.

A very nice poem Lisa. I like it.

Mark
luc (68.74.77.245) -- Monday, February 17 2003, 05:13 am


like the poem. made me remember a few things. heh. thanks i guess.. :)
Lisa (65.134.176.142) -- Wednesday, February 19 2003, 03:37 am


This poem is about a very close friend that I love. This poem expresses how I feel about him, and how he makes me feel.
sarah (68.227.77.72) -- Tuesday, January 27 2004, 09:53 pm

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its was sooooooooooo gooooood u put lots of deep words in there and keep up the good work
samantha (194.82.4.10) -- Wednesday, March 10 2004, 01:45 pm

amazin

that poem is really cool and reminds me of a verry close friend thanks x
 
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