Notice by Lisa H

you looked my way
then turned your face
I had gone unnoticed

I ran towards you
I called your name
but you just kept walking

I stood in front of you
I looked deep into your eyes
but you looked passed me

how I needed you
how I wanted you
how you didn't care

all my strength
all my time
all that you didn't notice

when no one listened
I listened
when no one cared
I cared

I gave you all of me
I gave every inch of my heart
thank you for throwing it a side

I threw my arms around you
I swore I would always love you
thank you for laughing at me

I don't really know if you didn't notice
or if you just didn't care
either way I loved you

lasohnda harris (12.229.199.53) -- Tuesday, February 25 2003, 08:54 pm

humm
humm was you talking about a kid that was making frount of you and you thought to your self that if he could turn your way and look at you enough to make frount of you that he must have notice you enough to like you also and is showing off infrount of his friends if yes than I like your poem alot if no I stll like your poem alot you should find some of my poems on here one day I hope keep writing your good.

Martin Vann (65.56.170.88) -- Thursday, February 27 2003, 10:33 pm

Lasohnda makes a point here!
Lisa,
He must have been a kid, as Lasohnda described him. I say that because, no "man," who had love, free of other responsibilities would have walked away and not have taken you in his arms and made your lips and body trimble!

MartinV

Lisa H (65.134.176.110) -- Friday, March 7 2003, 07:46 pm

Thanks guys
Thanks guys for the comments I really appreciate everything you guys have to say.

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