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Flooded
14 January, 2002
Author: Lonlyrockstar

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The ground seems to be flooded
flooded by tears of a girl
weeping tears that screams for you
as tears fall she recites a poem
a poem written for a boy
a boy she longing to be with
to tell this boy how she felt
but, it was yet too late
for the boy has already left
April 15, 2001 would be the last time she ever see him
yet she didn't suspect a thing
tears still falling
April 16, 2001 she was told something about this boy
she couldn't bare the news
the news saying that he left
so, i wrote this poem for you
what i done is unearseable
these feelings i left for you
i wanted to tell you
but, i was yet to late
my tears still weep for you as for today 2003
i try to forget for i may never see you again
so, i hope you are reading this
for i am comming clean and releasing my tears for you
you were and still someone who meant alot to me
you may not know it but its true
i can't show you but mabye my tears may
just to let you know i'm still weeping
as for today i sit here waiting to see your beautiful face again
thinking i may but i may not
so, i'm writing you this poem
to unleash these feelings
to a boy i most admire
Ben
"you will always be a part of my heart"
I now i sit here to flood the ground with my weeps

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Megan (205.188.209.37) -- Saturday, February 15 2003, 10:19 pm


I really liked this.
lonlyrockstar (216.54.14.84) -- Tuesday, February 18 2003, 06:13 pm

thanks

thanks i'll have to look up some of your poems.~Tiffany
LinzAy (64.12.96.77) -- Wednesday, February 19 2003, 10:27 am

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Very good poem rockstar....!
lonlyrockstar (216.54.14.84) -- Monday, February 24 2003, 03:58 pm

Thanks Linzay

Hey thanks Linzay i glad you like the poem. This poem is very personal to me. It took me a while to post this poem up. I've been contemplating rather or not i should post this poem up.
 
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