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..yeah..
15 April, 2004
Author: Luc

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is a rose still as beautiful,
with out its thorns?
what is life about,
if you have nothing to live for?
with two simple words,
my life's been turned upside down.
blood blinding me,
frantic, looking around.
without warming,
my light is blown out.
sadden, again,
i'll sit here in the dark.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Friday, April 18 2003, 12:29 am

Very Nice!

I like this poem luc. It is very capturing. Nice job!
Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Saturday, April 19 2003, 06:53 pm

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The opening lines here are beautiful Luc. It is well written and again I love the ending`my light is blown out' lovely!!
 
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