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Unselfishness
10 November, 2002
Author: Barbara Goodhew

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Trying to be caring and thoughtful is hard when you forget what you're told.
Remembering your own cares and thoughts are hard enough when you get old.

Feeling overwhelmed just because people have problems that you listen to.
Is putting yourself through anquish, that you don't need to.

It's nice to remember their woes.
But when you don't, they won't make you their foe.

Thinking of yourself when you're ill isn't being selfish.
You are just trying to get better ,so that you can worry about your friends woes
And to me that is being unselfish..

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Luc (67.36.176.58) -- Monday, November 11 2002, 09:05 am

.............

course its unselfish. like your poem. ^.^
Capricorn (62.30.192.1) -- Monday, November 11 2002, 11:21 am

Well done

Lovely thoughts Barb, and they rhyme too - well done!
It is hard to share people's problems when you have enough of your own,or you feel ill.I know that feeling too well.
barb (216.123.56.13) -- Monday, November 11 2002, 03:44 pm

understanding

thanks guys for understanding what I was trying to say and Cap of course the words rhyme,It's a poem not a statement Ha Ha
barb (216.123.56.13) -- Monday, November 11 2002, 04:00 pm

luc

I went to read some poems that you wrote this week, there weren't any. having a writers block luc. just make something up.You have a good imagination. looking forward to you writing. But hurry in case some one decides Ii should go .hha Ha
Luc (67.36.178.203) -- Tuesday, November 12 2002, 05:40 am

dunno

no writers block. i use to paint to express my feelings. back in the day. so i found my old paintings while cleaning ma basement so i started painting once more. i still got scribbles of poems crumpled in some pocket of some pair of pants just need to pick a time to add 'em here. ^.^
barb (216.123.56.13) -- Tuesday, November 12 2002, 05:58 am

expressing

as long as you are doing something you like and expressing yourself. Have fun
 
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