Killing Their Own by Maddy

They can't see
Through the smoke screen
What do I see
I see a dream

A nightmare to you
But a dream to me
A dream of desruction
What the world should be

They dont understand me
And they never will
They don't stop to think
Don't know their words kill

So the only friend I have
Is the cut of the blade
Their words destroy the monster
That their own hatred made

Aiden (165.247.107.243) -- Sunday, December 7 2003, 05:19 am

cool
Nice Poem! You have a true talent!

KitKatrina (68.113.60.103) -- Monday, December 8 2003, 05:48 am

wow
This was really powerful and I absolutely loved it Maddy. Keep writing, as I will keep reading...*****
-Trina

Marty Henry (206.158.10.6) -- Tuesday, December 9 2003, 05:22 pm

smoke screen
A wonderful poem I say. May the smoke clear, with no more cutting of the blade.

Thank you Maddy
MARTY H

Ruydragon (212.50.186.53) -- Wednesday, December 10 2003, 06:15 pm

Like it
Keep working this well and your poems will be as dark as mine, I like it

Maddy (165.247.81.57) -- Thursday, January 22 2004, 03:09 am

Thanx
thanx for all your comments, the thing is, people think the fact that i'm only 13 is really weird... i don't see why...

Lady Eryemil (152.163.252.67) -- Monday, March 22 2004, 01:33 am

^_^
To me there is no such thing as dark poetry, there are dark poems, but poetry is just feelings made into words. Anyways I really like your work.

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