Thin Black Line
16 October, 2003
Author: ShyHeart
Just, a thin, black line, yet, it can take your breath away
Fill your heart with joy, put a smile, upon a tear
Or bring your farthest dream so near
That you can see and feel it’s beauty, like a summer day
Its a thin, black line, that connects the heart, soul and mind
Once the three, become one, the spirit…, is free to flow
Tying together, emotions, revelations, and secrets that
We never told before, now, we shout out loud
A trail of courage, blazed, only by the brave
Without hesitation, sometimes, with no direction
We open up and share, our most, trying experience
I am freedom, no prison captures me, even though, I’m doing time
My spirit’s free and flies, within, that thin, black line
We leave our memories, and we document them well,
For what we share, before we go, may save
Some other searching sole, from a lonely, hell
From this honest, spirit’s flow
We can warm a life, that before, was cold
What other way, do we have, to share our love?
With others who come after us, they need not, know our name
It is our spirit, they will share, and the truth about our lives
All encased, within, this thin, black line
------- Author's Notes -------
As Poet’s, We Don’t Need Much Room, To Enjoy And Share, The Freedom Of Our Minds We Can Do It All, Within, These Thin, Black Lines |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
LOVIE COLLINS (12.41.229.20) -- Friday, October 17 2003, 02:19 pm will martin you have done at agin - thin black line made my day i fill like our talk got another master of all master poems from you- by the i can't fine are remember the name of the frist poem of yours that i read- when i was reading the poem i was back in country. semper fi. scout/sniper forevery your bro lovie collins. |
Martin Vann (171.75.221.3) -- Friday, October 17 2003, 02:58 pm Lovie, Was great to hear from you, no matter how many year roll by, I don't forget Nam or my comrades either. Pleased you enjoyed the poem. We need poetry in our lives as much as we need our friends, like you. Thanks, MartinV |
Terrie* (65.148.211.207) -- Saturday, October 18 2003, 02:37 am very pleasing work...your poetry carries a special quality.....and i can beat on a race horse that you carry that quality in your self just as well...and i'm not a gambling individual:) |
Martin Vann (63.185.64.157) -- Tuesday, July 20 2004, 09:32 pm Terrie, Thank you for reading, all the words, not written, between the lines of black & white, truly, you, must have a loving soul. MartinV |
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