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Have You Ever, Lived This Dream?
23 August, 2003
Author: ShyHeart

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“Dedicated To CAP”


Have you ever, lived this dream?
You were so, much in love
Your heart, sailed above the moon
All the stars, were at your feet

Have you ever, lived this dream?
There was nothing else, you needed
Nothing else, you wanted
Have you ever, lived this dream?

Was the world so far, below
You felt, only your, heart
Could, know what, real love means
Have you ever, lived this dream?

Have you ever seen the rain
Fall, beneath your feet
You were so, high above it,
Have you ever, lived this dream?

Have you ever fallen, from, so high
That when you finally, hit the bottom
There was nothing left to do, but cry
Have you ever, lived this dream?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ben (67.124.46.110) -- Monday, August 25 2003, 07:02 am

Way good, Martin, on......

Way good, Martin, on Have You Ever, lived This Dream. Good flow and well written. I like it very much! Keep it up with stuff like this!! Thank you!
Charmaine (165.21.144.123) -- Monday, August 25 2003, 01:39 pm

Great one..!

Love this..! great job..!
Capricorn (82.36.128.96) -- Tuesday, August 26 2003, 10:49 pm

Thanks

I've never had a poem dedicated to me before... I feel very honoured! Your words have touched me especially the last stanza...very perceptive Martin.
Your words just flowed with beauty. Thankyou.
sophie and hannah (217.42.138.234) -- Tuesday, January 13 2004, 10:16 pm

good

it was amazing and helped us
 
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