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The Morning Dove
29 July, 2003
Author: ShyHeart

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Coo, Coo, I’ve heard her voice in the morning,
Now, I’m asking, haven’t you?

The poets’ pen, like the morning Dove,
lines the nest with love.

Sheltering it’s unborn, from the storms,
she knows, will come.

If, god and pen are true,
then these words, will be born,

With tiny wings, strong and true,
My poetic vision, will reach you.

I ask you now, have you heard, her voice
in the early morn?
Saying to her world, I ‘m in love with you.

From butterflies, to dragon flies, all, have words to say
listen to their words on wings, before, they fly away…,

It is my poet’s heart, that you see, fly away,
I truly wish that you had heard,
What their tiny wings,
Had to say

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ben (67.123.244.245) -- Thursday, July 31 2003, 11:05 pm

Your poetic vision reached.....

Your poetic vision reach me all the way out here in these hills on the West Coast, Martin! Good job! Thanks!
barb (66.46.241.80) -- Friday, August 1 2003, 01:42 am

good

yep I,ve heard the voice coo coo it wakes me up every morning. Hha good vision martin
Capricorn (82.36.128.96) -- Friday, August 1 2003, 08:12 am

Beautiful

Your words have painted a beautiful picture here Martin. I really enjoyed reading this.
luc (68.74.116.248) -- Saturday, August 2 2003, 12:17 am

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"I ask you now, have you heard, her voice in the early morn? Saying to her world, I ‘m in love with you.
From butterflies, to dragon flies, all, have words to say listen to their words on wings, before, they fly away…,"
i love those words. something about them. the way the flow together, the way they roll off your tounge. something aboutit just made me smile, and i loved it. great job.. :)
Enchantress(once known as CrYsTaL) (206.214.67.145) -- Sunday, August 3 2003, 05:08 am

Outstanding...

Hey Martin! I really loved this one, it had some full meaning to it somehow. I just couldn't put my finger on it. But anyway, it was so lovely...I love your poetry. It's so insightful, you really are talented. Keep writing, and as always, I'll keep reading...
MartinV (67.75.179.13) -- Sunday, August 3 2003, 07:24 pm

Thank You All..., The Morning Dove

I have always found it to be such an eye-opener when we see so much beauty in something so common to us all. I know, many of us just need to take time, and see all the simple beauty, that is all around us, all the time.

Thank you, thank you Very Much!
MartinV
 
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