Lover's Island
4 April, 2003
Author: ShyHeart
Hey, let’s get OUT of here, let’s set our sails
The course unknown, but to ourselves
My lover’s heart, will lead the way
A secret place, where lovers dwell
It is an Island in the Sea
So far away, no eye can see
Yet, all us lovers, search for thee
“Be honest now, we do, Don’t we?”
Its here I’ll be, with my love
Who shares my Island, in the sea
So, very far from anywhere, except
This place, that sets us free
The morning sun, will kiss the sea
A breeze is born, so fresh and warm
Its here we’ll love, more than live
Lover’s Island , so far, far, far,
away, far away at sea.?
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Red Dragon (210.14.4.51) -- Monday, April 7 2003, 06:59 am Could the love you talk about here is a forbidden one? "Its here I’ll be, with my love,Who shares my Island, in the sea, So, very far from anywhere, except,This place, that sets us free..."...could these lovers share a love improper for the time...like right love at the wrong time...or not even time for "wrong lovers"...but no matter what, the way i see it, sacrifice is the life blood of lovers and reality is the destiny:It is an Island in the Sea,So far away, no eye can see, Yet, all us lovers, search for thee ,“Be honest now, we do, Don’t we?” |
| LinzAy (205.188.208.9) -- Monday, April 7 2003, 09:33 am I really like this one......good writing Martin |
| barb (206.191.91.76) -- Monday, April 7 2003, 11:07 pm Hope my lover doesn't like water.I'm afraid of seas ,oceans, lakes. I feel comfortable when I can see sides like a pool or bathtub. nice dream and fantasy though. your poems are always interesting |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, April 8 2003, 12:32 am I really like this one. Im almost positive i connect with it in someway. Just not shure how. Well nice job! |
| Martin Vann (67.75.176.42) -- Tuesday, April 8 2003, 12:53 am How about, you and I meet secretly? We get a room all to our selves, a nice one of course. Then we turn the music low, get close together, and write a poem together. About a shark who loved the deep, but found the "fin," of his heart. Yet, his lover was afraid of water, like, if she diped her head, and saw bubbles, sorry, shark, its all over! Yet, he loved her so, this fin of his, that he gave up deep water, to set with her beside the tub, and with his fins around her, they used a straw, and took turns, blowing bubbles into the tub. To my Bar-Bi-Doll MartinV |
| Martin Vann (67.75.176.42) -- Tuesday, April 8 2003, 01:32 am Of course, I appreciate the fact, you took the time, to read the words, of a raving mind. However as you know, Barb, is bit (Could have said BITE) shy of water that comes up and over her wittle toes. So, bear with me, I need to give my lady Barb, special attention else, she will flounder on some lonesome sand-bar. MartinV |
| barb (66.46.230.139) -- Tuesday, April 8 2003, 02:10 am Oh Martin I'm flattered that you like me but I should tell you I'm 92 years old and I have no spark left. |
| barb (66.46.230.139) -- Tuesday, April 8 2003, 02:11 am Oh Martin I'm flattered that you like me but I should tell you I'm 92 years old and I have no spark left. |
| barb (66.46.230.139) -- Tuesday, April 8 2003, 06:45 am your poems are so sensitive and descriptive, don't stop writing them look forward to reading them and your comments |
| Martin Vann (65.56.174.155) -- Tuesday, April 8 2003, 04:32 pm Barb, Sparks fly, in the way your write, no, I did not misunderstand, nor do your words lead us on, except to makes us smile and give vision to our eyes, you make them spark-el. No, I did not misunderstand, I see you through your words and I like what I see! MartinV |
| Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Thursday, April 10 2003, 12:56 am A beautiful poem martin! |
| Libranian (80.110.254.26) -- Saturday, February 14 2004, 03:32 pm I'm speechles! This poem rocks! |
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