The Wilderness Of Life
3 February, 2003
Author: ShyHeart
Walking through this forest, I’m lost, like a child, cold and hungry. Looking for direction, its the North Star that I seek. |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
lasohnda harris (12.229.199.53) -- Wednesday, March 5 2003, 01:15 am Hi,I like your poem you really put a lot into it |
LinzAy (64.12.102.46) -- Wednesday, March 5 2003, 01:24 am o wow!! so much depth there!! Awesome one Martin!! Beautifully written too...like the city/earth comparisons! |
Philoso Furr (63.199.95.22) -- Wednesday, March 5 2003, 03:25 am ...And hardly ever heard from you. I don't think honesty unto oneself is a circle that leads nowhere, but more of a spiral. It re-visits you in its cyclical nature, tests to see if you've learned that your dishonesty hurts yourself and others, and continues to climb ever-higher out of the well of despair and self-pity you've created as a result of bad choices. But that's just my opinion. |
Martin Vann (65.57.59.187) -- Wednesday, March 5 2003, 04:23 pm Tweet & LinzAy, your thoughts are very much appreicated, thanks for sharing them with me. Philoso Furr (Clever signature) Your thoughts are also appreciated and carry great weight and simple logic. I don't feel self-pity, or abnormal despair, but I do regret my mistakes. Thank You, Martin |
lasohnda harris (12.229.199.53) -- Wednesday, March 5 2003, 06:42 pm whem my friend martin and linzay going to look at my poem so many months frozen.ha,ha you don't have to just playing hey martin email me |
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