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Long, Lonely Road
16 February, 2003
Author: ShyHeart

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I had been on this road for hours, two lanes, paved, somewhere in New Mexico. Felt like I’d been driving forever, looking for a place to go.

I looked ahead, all I saw was this long black line, heading toward eternity. Everything on the radio, began to sound the same so,

I turned it off, rolled my window down, stuck my hand out, like feeling life’s refrain.

The sun was bright, not too hot, pretty day really, and there was only me. On either side of the road was this never ending barbed-wire fence.

I started to pay attention to the little pieces of paper, trapped here and there, clinging to this barbed-wire fence.

I began to wonder, what message each piece of paper at one time had to say.

Perhaps an advertisement about a great deal on lawn mowers or, if one might had been a message, a plea for help, its words now faded, “I’ve been kidnapped, please, come save the day!”

I think I even saw a shirt, trapped upon this fence, so empty it looked, blowing in the wind.

This road I traveled all alone, then, it seem to become my friend, telling me things in bits and pieces, like words blowing in the wind.

Strange what a long, lonely drive can do, how it seems to take control of mind and sole. As I traveled down this long black road, I begin to think about my destination. I’ll sure be happy to get there and off this lonely road.

Once I’m there, once I reach my destination, I would find light and life, freedom from this lonely apparition.

Then it hit me, this was not a lonely drive, traveling down a dark black line. For were it not for this road, I’d never reach my destination. On the road to long, well, it can take over your imagination.

The color black, I let that play my mind, like a child might do with clay.

I happy now, I’m on this road and I will stay its course, to change direction or have hesitation, might lead me off the road and take me to that barbed-wire fence, I come to far to end up, just blowing in the wind.

Oh, there it is, just ahead, I’m finally getting close. I see a big sign that says, Welcome to Truth Or Consequences, New Mexico.

Great, that means a short rest, a bite to eat then head for home. Not far down the road is "Lordsburg, New Mexico."

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ben (67.123.244.245) -- Wednesday, July 30 2003, 11:57 pm

Martin! I was on that same....

Martin! I was on that same road you were on, on the SAME DAY!! I was right behind you!! I kept wondering why you didn't speed up, and why you kept looking side to side at that barbed-wire fence!! Ha! Ha! Hey, I'm KIDDING! I have been on those same roads, though! I grew up in Hobbs, New Mexico and I still hit those roads usually at least once a year. So, thanks for the writing, it did take me right to a place I'll soon be seeing again, God willing!!
MartinV (171.75.207.230) -- Thursday, July 31 2003, 08:32 pm

So, It was YOU!

NOW, I remember looking back, via my rear {View mirror that is) and saw this guy coming up on my behind.

He was riding one of those surf-board wind sale things, wearing cowboy boots up to his knees and one of those Bee-Keen-Nee swim suits.

He was waving like hell! I didn't wave back, just knew if I did, I end up, on the eternal, damn, barbed-wire fence, Sorry Ben didn't know it was you.

MartinV.

P.S.
I really enjoy your work. I rememebr driving through Las Cruces in the early morn, the dew had fallen, I could smell the Alfalfa, oh, what sweet dreams we can dream, this is what I love, about Dreamersreality.
 
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