Courage Of The Poet's Pen
4 February, 2003
Author: ShyHeart
Unlike soldiers called to war, we have no army to support our call. |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
Martin Vann (67.75.182.28) -- Friday, February 7 2003, 03:33 pm Without your knowledge or permission, in this writting, you both made a contribution. Mark, shows us how to find the courage and light, to enter through these chamber's doors. Seizure, with his insight of the harsh reality of life, makes it exciting and daring, to pass on through the door, into the darkened chambers of our soles. I thank you both! Martin V. |
Seizure (68.154.9.85) -- Saturday, February 8 2003, 07:48 pm It was a good read. I think all poets on this site should read this one as personally I feel it pertains to everyone viewing Dreamers Reality. I'm out. |
2 Seizure (65.57.57.58) -- Saturday, February 8 2003, 08:57 pm C the effect you have on others, very influential, the work you do. If, you give me anymore ideas, I'll let you and hope you don't mind me using them. Thanks, Martin P.S. Glad you made it out, knew you would. |
LinzAy (64.12.102.23) -- Friday, February 14 2003, 05:52 pm O wow! this is really good Martin! I love how you interpreted everything. Castle being the soul....its chambers being every one of our emotions and/or memories. And the end of it being so fearful but turning out so good. Excellent writing Martin! |
Lori Ann Day (198.81.26.167) -- Saturday, February 22 2003, 11:47 am The pen is the greatest weapon that reveals we are human and alive with blood coursing through our veins. I wrote something years ago having to do with the power of the pen, "Moses had Aaron, and I have my pen." Thank you for sharing your brightest and most brilliant light. |
Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Saturday, March 1 2003, 02:19 am This is powerful stuff Martin, I am so glad you led me here. I often mention the `soul' when I write and feel we do write from our heart and soul, so this has given me an incite into the castle of life! Well written! I also like the part at the end about having faith in your pen. What is that saying now about `the pen is mightier than the sword' Your pen has certainly been mighty here Martin. |
To Cap (67.75.180.72) -- Saturday, March 1 2003, 03:23 am You notice at the beginning, I do not take credit for this work, myself. You, Mark Spencer, Seizure (Seiz, you got to love that guy) and so many others like Lori, Pamela, LinzAy, gee, can't name all of you. Its your contributions to deramersreality, that give my pen, vision & direction. None of us will ever write our heart's thoughts upon the sun-baked rock of life, unless, some other soles, "read what we write." Thanks Cap, very, very much! I think we are even now, well, sort of, you really beat me and others up with The "Damn Baby Crying thing." I know the title is probably, not right, but you know what I mean. Hey, Becky, AKA, DREAMER, see what your love for poets has started, a revolution of hearts from across the world, sharing and caring. Because you Becky, gave us Dreamersreality, Thank YOU! MartinV |
Lori Ann Day (198.81.26.167) -- Sunday, March 2 2003, 12:15 pm You wanted to know about my comment, "Moses had Aaron and I have my pen." Aaron spoke for Moses. Moses knew the words to say. They just didn't always come out of his mouth. I am a bit that way. It is easier to let my pen speak for me. I know that I can truly express my feelings this way, and people have to take the time to read and think. Thank you for wondering. |
Emily (12.227.17.72) -- Tuesday, March 11 2003, 02:41 am Hello I am a middle schooler and I just read your poem that was really good. I wish that I could write like you. You have a very stong talent and I look up to that. Maybe one day I'll create something that wonderful in my life time! |
To Emily (63.208.63.204) -- Tuesday, March 11 2003, 04:25 pm Emily, As young as you are, you have already created a wonderful thing, an many others I'm sure. Poets write for others, not themselves and to receive a comment such as yours, is why we write. Your life is ahead of you, be true to yourself, your faith and always be courageous when you know you are right. Be kind to others and you will be onto yourself and others, a wonderous human being. When you write, let your heart speak to your sole, then write the conversation down as you heard it, the result will be truth and you may surprise yourself with what you write. May God Bless You, Martin Vann P.S. Emily, may I suggest that you read some of the works on this site by Mark Spencer. You will be rewarded for the effort, by his words. |
ShyHeart (67.75.181.142) -- Thursday, May 22 2003, 06:55 pm I was very tense at first, as I read this, love the ending. Shyheart |
YVETTE (24.196.216.254) -- Wednesday, August 20 2003, 12:55 pm I REALLY LIKE ALL OF THESE POEMS GOOD LUCK WITH THEM |
Chrissy Mae (10.0.0.1) -- Wednesday, October 22 2003, 05:29 pm when I first saw this poem all I saw was the length, then I read it. It trully is inspiring. After reading this beutiful poem, I want to write some poetry of my own. I just wanted to thank you for writing it. |
Martin Vann (171.75.207.184) -- Wednesday, October 22 2003, 09:55 pm Chrissy Mae; this was a "special-Poem," I never pened one this long before. If, you have desire, passionet desire, to write, then do so, but, let it flow, don't work it. In time, you will know what I mean. Regards to you, we all, await your first poem, MartinV |
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