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The Demon
28 January, 2003
Author: ShyHeart

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There is a demon in my heart
That tears my kindest thoughts apart
No matter how hard I try
My words are thieves, they setal and lie

I am the demon in myself, there I've said it, now I know,
I am the demon and solution.
To my self, I give this proclamation

DEMON, GO! I cast you out
From my heart's sacred house
And where you go, I do not care
But, pray you die..., before you're there!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Lori Ann Day (198.81.26.138) -- Saturday, February 22 2003, 11:34 am


Martin, always remember, that where our minds focus, there we will be. You can mentally walk away from any thought as you navigate through this world of feeling.
Martin Vann (65.57.61.136) -- Friday, February 28 2003, 04:51 pm

Very Good Advice, Lori, thanks

I'm very impressed with your ability to take my heart's dark, clothing, wash it as you do, and hang in Sunlight so that I can see what I'm wearing, and when its time to change.

Lori, my reply has no reflection that I think all women can do is raise children and wash clothes, you know me better than that. So, why did I even mention it? Don't know. It was just my way of saying what I meant. I'm learning and my vision is clearing because, of replies like yours and others. I supppose poets often use poems as questions, looking for answers. Your reply/answer is very much appreciated. Thank You!

MartinV
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, April 24 2003, 01:59 am

Great Poem!

great job martin!
cristina (129.44.16.192) -- Tuesday, May 27 2003, 08:31 am

nice poem

but wouldn't you have to die to if your your own demon???
Martin Vann (63.208.62.31) -- Friday, May 30 2003, 05:29 pm

You asked a very good question...,

Cristina,

My answer is, if, I can and have, cast the Demon out, then in its place, I have my life back.

Your are a very serious reader, thanks for the question, hope you appreicate my answer.

Regards,
MartinV
cristina (141.149.6.192) -- Sunday, June 1 2003, 05:37 am

thankz

thankz for explaining and thankz for the complement
Luc (68.74.76.234) -- Saturday, June 14 2003, 12:01 am

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i have read it.. andi have loved it. but i dont want to cast my demon out cuz im afraid of the silence it'll leave me with. but i will someday.

the wording of the poem, it just flows, and i like it alow. a true gift with words you have with you martin. best wishes
 
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