You Make Me by Leah06

Hopeless and in love
In pain but living my dream
Alone yet surrounded
Dead but still breathing
Overweight and beautiful
A mistake yet perfect
Young yet knowing
You say the list goes on
But I'd rather spend your time
With you loving me.

Clive (63.184.96.60, 2) -- Friday, April 2 2004, 07:02 pm

You're never alone
Love needs to be unconditional to work, Positive for strength, Happy to grow,
I liked your poem,
keep writing

Meridian (205.188.116.145) -- Friday, April 2 2004, 07:08 pm

Now, that's a good poem you got there!!
HEY LEAH06! The Princess of Poetry!! I love your deep poem on true love. Yep! Spend all the time you want with your man!!

Have fun!!

Meridian

Martin Vann (4.244.87.201) -- Wednesday, April 14 2004, 03:53 pm

Really,like this poem, short, simple & COMPLETE!
Leah06,

I really, like this poem. We read poems in a different way and see different things. Although you put a lot of easy to see and feel emotion in this work, the last couple of lines reminded me of a song. The main, hook line in the song is, "A little Less Talk and A Lot More Action."

Very good Leah06,

UM

LinzAy (24.27.237.195) -- Friday, April 16 2004, 03:56 pm

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Ah...to know how this feels truly sucks!! I had all this...but i never got the time spent with love. Only betrayal and pain. Nice writing Leah

Leah06 (24.5.241.141) -- Monday, April 19 2004, 12:26 am

thanks!
UM-dosent elvis sing that song? thanks for the comments! LinzAy-yea it sucks but i have all of you to share it with!

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