To Dad by Meg

He's left this world
Hes never coming back
He travelled the tunnel
and entered the world
something no-one would expect to happen
and can never be taken back
the last words i said
will never leave my mind
the way he cared for me
even though i shut him out
i did love him deep inside
but i dont think he knew
hes left this world
and hes never coming back
be careful how you treat people
id do anything in the world
for one last hug.

crystal (12.221.170.97) -- Sunday, December 8 2002, 12:36 am

thats sooooo cute
oh my god that is soo cute how ever did this is the best good job

heather (24.196.156.144) -- Sunday, December 29 2002, 09:19 am

i like it
thats a good poem, my father passed away last year and i relate to that poem more than u would beleive!

meg (144.138.81.245) -- Monday, January 6 2003, 10:09 am

i believe you :)
my dad only recently passed too, and im so angry at myself for not saying bye..but how was i to know?! its hard hey!

Martin Vann (65.56.173.61) -- Saturday, January 11 2003, 12:20 am

"To my daughter,"
The time has come and I must leave.
but there is something, you need to know,
about me.

You are my daughter and I "am" your father
wished we could haave called a truce,
before I took my leave.

Sometimes my actions, seemed cold and crule,
but never, ever, did I mean to hurt you.

You feel my loss, oh my god, just think of me,
loving you as I do, wish I just once again,
I could sit you on my knee.

That time has passed, and now its way passed time
to tell you how much you mean to me.

I say this as a father, who ingnored his daughter's needs.

I always loved you darling, please, please,
forgive me.

Love,

Dad

Meg (144.138.79.163) -- Monday, January 13 2003, 10:24 am

ohh
wow thats beautiful..brought tears to my eyes :) thank you

lisa miller (24.72.92.94) -- Friday, February 21 2003, 06:09 am

you know what don't be hard on yourself one bit about shutting him out or not being able to say goodbye because girl you have enough love in your heart to write that poem you go girl! may god be with you and i dont know your situation but i can say that life is life and either way we make it through and thats just what youll do

nessa (65.68.185.94) -- Friday, October 17 2003, 01:11 am

yeah i would do anything for one last hug..........
my dad left me when i was little and i would do anything for one last hug or even a simple i love you but i know it won't happen so i just dream and wish that one day he well come back

Linda Cohn (199.224.92.167) -- Monday, December 29 2003, 04:44 pm

My Dad
I felt the poem was well written,I myself writes poetry and whenever I think of my husband and the 30 years we hed together which I am most grateful for,the words just seem to come.He died June 22,2002.

dana bennett (12.227.155.62) -- Friday, February 27 2004, 04:09 am

it is so sad!!!!!!!!! but yet touching
this poem has made me see how important some men can be in our lives.as much as i despise my dad i have relized he is not going to be here for ever.and for me to cherish every moment i have with him.

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