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I Don't Like Today
10 July, 2002
Author: Meg

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As I awake from my sleep
I feel down, empty...something is missing
What?
I hold my tears back
It seems ages since ive seen you
But still I go on
What other choice have I got?
Everything is going wrong for me today
My candlelight has been blown out
My heart feels empty
Im praying
I could just hear you say
Its ok!
I feel so sad right now
Everythings wrong
I don't like today
And as I go to sleep now
I hope I like tomorrow

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Comments on this poem/writing:

jessi (66.66.4.38) -- Friday, January 3 2003, 12:42 am

like it

hey, i like ur poem. i can relate. but i hate everyday. things dont always turn out like u had hoped. but ya gotta push on. right?
meg (144.138.81.245) -- Monday, January 6 2003, 10:06 am

right!

things hardly ever turn out like you hope or plan..because you cant plan ur life. i hate a lot of days too, but you gotta keep soldiering on and MAKING ur life how you want it. dont plan...lifes a journey you dont have a map for.
martysires (208.187.50.104) -- Tuesday, January 7 2003, 06:47 am

hey!!

i like your poem all from the heart good job
Pamela (66.38.146.78) -- Wednesday, January 8 2003, 02:33 am


I am in lov with the line "my candelight has been blown out"
I know exactly how you feel - but on the bright side, a candle can always be re-lit......
Meg (144.138.79.163) -- Monday, January 13 2003, 10:25 am

true!

thats true...its always able to :)
Emily (66.67.37.219) -- Monday, October 13 2003, 03:29 am

It's hard

People say lifes has its ups and downs but all I see is the down side. I haven't heard its ok in the longest time and I know how it is
 
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